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Final Track

Final Track

by laurbits
My official entry and finalist for Yen Press’ New Talent Search 2010.

Nerdy girl meets punk ghost and together resolve his unfinished business.

Also archived on my website.
http://www.laurbits.com/archive/final-track-cover/
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32
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Completed
Last Update
8 Years Ago
Fans
37
Readers
6

Final Track

My official entry and finalist for Yen Press’ New Talent Search 2010.

Nerdy girl meets punk ghost and together resolve his unfinished business.

Also archived on my website.
http://www.laurbits.com/archive/final-track-cover/

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@Tacto Thank you so much! I really appreciate it. <3 <3 <3
This is a really nice story. I loved the characters and the general feel of it. It read very well, good pacing and very nice balance of serious and humor.
Great work on this :)
Tacto
April 11th, 2012
:D love the dialogue on this page!
@Kirikirimai
Yeah! I wanted to post my own feedback at GoManga but the forums somehow locked me out. ;_; Tried retrieving my password but that doesn't work either.

They told me I it was good in general but I need to make it more polished and master the basic stuff like toning, linework and anatomy. :)

EDIT1: No problem at all! I did have a co-writer on this to help me shape the story and my sister gave a lot of feedback art-wise to polish it up.
Thanks so much, Tsumetai & Scribe_Drizz! I really appreciate your comments. :)
This is a beautiful story! T___T
2nd panel = adorable!!
This is cute! ^^
;w; i really liked this, so glad i found and read this story, it's so good.