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Farewell Feeling (old version)

by rainysidewalks
this is the older, now outdated version of my webcomic Farewell Feeling. the current version can be found at Farewellfeeling.smackjeeves.com !

some of this material is quite old, and I no longer consider it to be anywhere near my best work -- so I have taken it off the main Farewell Feeling smackjeeves site and put it here for "storage."

if you would still like to try reading this version, please go ahead! just be aware that the newer one makes much more sense and has fewer mary-sue & annoying characters :P also I've become aware that at the time I wrote this I made some Japanese grammatical errors that I would not make were I writing this now.

unfortunately when I moved these pages here off the main site, I lost all comments people had left over the time I was posting the pages. this made me so sad ;_; but it was time for this comic to move out. I'm sorry to any who had their comments deleted -- I truly appreciated every single one!

also - please note that the author comments were simply copied over from each page as they were originally posted and some may be outdated/etc...

now then, on to Old Farewell Feeling ~
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Farewell Feeling (old version)

this is the older, now outdated version of my webcomic Farewell Feeling. the current version can be found at Farewellfeeling.smackjeeves.com !

some of this material is quite old, and I no longer consider it to be anywhere near my best work -- so I have taken it off the main Farewell Feeling smackjeeves site and put it here for "storage."

if you would still like to try reading this version, please go ahead! just be aware that the newer one makes much more sense and has fewer mary-sue & annoying characters :P also I've become aware that at the time I wrote this I made some Japanese grammatical errors that I would not make were I writing this now.

unfortunately when I moved these pages here off the main site, I lost all comments people had left over the time I was posting the pages. this made me so sad ;_; but it was time for this comic to move out. I'm sorry to any who had their comments deleted -- I truly appreciated every single one!

also - please note that the author comments were simply copied over from each page as they were originally posted and some may be outdated/etc...

now then, on to Old Farewell Feeling ~

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*O*
the effects are relly effective!
cool picture *O*
NOICE PICTURE!
this is the older, now outdated version of my webcomic Farewell Feeling. the current version can be found at Farewellfeeling.smackjeeves.com !

some of this material is quite old, and I no longer consider it to be anywhere near my best work -- so I have taken it off the main Farewell Feeling smackjeeves site and put it here for "storage."

if you would still like to try reading this version, please go ahead! just be aware that the newer one makes much more sense and has fewer mary-sue & annoying characters :P also I've become aware that at the time I wrote this I made some Japanese grammatical errors that I would not make were I writing this now.

unfortunately when I moved these pages here off the main site, I lost all comments people had left over the time I was posting the pages. this made me so sad ;_; but it was time for this comic to move out. I'm sorry to any who had their comments deleted -- I truly appreciated every single one!

also - please note that the author comments were simply copied over from each page as they were originally posted and some may be outdated/etc...

now then, on to Old Farewell Feeling ~
Chapter 3 is entirely a sketch comic, and so I did not re-upload all of it here. If you want to read it you can go to photobucket.com/oldfarewellfeeling

unfortunately only the English version is available because of the re-upload. sorry!

and with that ends this older version of Farewell Feeling. I hope you won't be too put off by the substandard writing and artwork in this older version to take a look at the newer, more thoroughly thought out version:
farewellfeeling.smackjeeves.com
rainysidewalks
June 6th, 2011
感動でしたかね?
a little omake about our eavesdroppers from page 38.
I guess ellison and ameko got that cafe a couple of regular customers xD
3章へ!
43 pages...I believe this is the longest chapter I have yet made ^.^
on to chapter 3! thank you for continuing to read. *bows* I hope you enjoy the next story arc :-)

yoroshiku ne!

also, thank you to Richvh for pointing out some typos I had made on previous pages. when I get a chance I'll definitely go back and fix them. thank you~!
次のページは章の最後のページです。
almost to the end of the chapter! almost to chapter 3!

and finally, the other emotions make a reappearance xD
they sort of disappeared from the story for a little while, but they'll be back more in the next chapter.

note: this comic is not usually a sketch comic. see the link below for an explanation of why the current pages are sketch:
http://farewellfeeling.smackjeeves.com/comics/932884/ch-2-pg-37-2-31456-31532-3 7-12506 -12540-12472/
言ったじゃん!
she said his name.

note: this comic is not usually a sketch comic. see the link below for an explanation of why the current pages are sketch:
http://farewellfeeling.smackjeeves.com/comics/932884/ch-2-pg-37-2-31456-31532-3 7-12506 -12540-12472/
やっと!
chapter 2 almost over! looking forward to chapter 3 ^^

note: this comic is not usually a sketch comic. see the link below for an explanation of why the current pages are sketch:
http://farewellfeeling.smackjeeves.com/comics/932884/ch-2-pg-37-2-31456-31532-3 7-12506 -12540-12472/
本当だ。
take the twins (tomoyo and tomosuke from chapter 1), for instance.

note: this comic is not usually a sketch comic. see the link below for an explanation of why the current pages are sketch:
http://farewellfeeling.smackjeeves.com/comics/932884/ch-2-pg-37-2-31456-31532-3 7-12506 -12540-12472/
感情がまた登場
the emotions are back!

note: this comic is not usually a sketch comic. see the link below for an explanation of why the current pages are sketch:
http://farewellfeeling.smackjeeves.com/comics/932884/ch-2-pg-37-2-31456-31532-3 7-12506-1 2540-12472/
誰か見てるよ、エリソン君�
I apologize for the sketch page.
from now until the 22nd of September I'm going to be either in japan or preparing to go to japan, so I'll have limited access to tablet/internet and there may be many sketch pages during that time.

BUT, THIS IS NOT A HIATUS!

I will continue to update regularly; I'm just warning you that there may be some (or a lot) of sketch pages like this one. thanks for bearing with me! ^^;

also, natasha, you need to let me know what you'd like for the next chapter's cover image, since you were the first to guess their song :-)
ゲッスしてよ、ゲッス
if you guess what song it is he's singing, you get to dictate what the next chapter cover picture is! xD

also, if you're interested there's a new page up at the Farewell Feeling Extras page that shows what ellison and the others looked like in the previous version of the comic: http://farewellfeelingextras.smackjeeves.com/comics/925135/time-lapse/
さあ、歌って!
the last word bubble will make more sense when you see the next page.

anybody else out there like yuya matsushita, btw? I just heard/saw clips of the Kuroshitsuji musical and it is amazing xD the dancing is a little weird, though.
長�!
this could be the longest chapter one of my stories has ever had. usually they cap at 20 or 30 pages.

sorry for the sketch-page-ness; actual page will be uploaded later.
やっと
this page was fuuuun
I love drawing eyes xD
馬鹿じゃないよ。
confused ellison is confused. but once again it's his turn to talk, so he better think of something soon...
I'm not so happy with how I ended up scripting the last few pages...I think I just made things confusing OTL
I may go back and redo them at some point.
I'll do better with the rest of the chapter, I promise. thanks for bearing with me ^^;;;
やっと着付いたのか?
ellison isn't the only one who is sometimes slow on the uptake. but honestly, the situation is already so strange that I'm not sure if I would immediately realize something was off either...
I'm sorry!
this page is sort of late. I'm sorry T_T
the internet at our house totally died yesterday and today and wasn't able to get to a cafe with wifi until 9:00 this evening.

ALSO: there are some new retroactive pages. please go to pages 23 and 25 to see ^^

ALSO ALSO: Thank you so much to everyone who stopped by our table and/or bought something at AnimeNEXT! you guys made the weekend awesome. it was great to meet you in person! ^.^