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by Kyrie
I'm trying to make the english version for this comic, it's a good way for practice I guess XD
Please tell me if you see any mistakes ^^

The story is about one lonely girl who trusts nobody and one stupid happy boy that wants to be her friend. Yeah! It's a shojo manga :)

Spanish Version! http://www.smackjeeves.com/comicprofile.php?id=104845
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I'm trying to make the english version for this comic, it's a good way for practice I guess XD
Please tell me if you see any mistakes ^^

The story is about one lonely girl who trusts nobody and one stupid happy boy that wants to be her friend. Yeah! It's a shojo manga :)

Spanish Version! http://www.smackjeeves.com/comicprofile.php?id=104845

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Petrotasia
August 13th, 2012
My god... XD that guy IS kinda stupid lol but I love him already
Kyrie
July 7th, 2012
@delryyy: I'm so sorry! I promise I'll update tomorrow ^^
delryyy
June 23rd, 2012
ow pls update! :3
Kyrie
May 28th, 2012
@terriXknight: Thank you so much! ^^
terriXknight
May 26th, 2012
lol...XD Richi always finish the book!!!
This is goin great, can't wait to read more...=D
Kyrie
May 20th, 2012
I need english lessons! XD
Kyrie
May 5th, 2012
@ammychild: Thank you very much! I'm so glad you like it ^^
Kyrie
May 5th, 2012
I still alive! :D
Once again, sorry for my terrible english ^^;
SadistiCeRen
February 26th, 2012
@Kyrie: (v^~^)
Kyrie
February 26th, 2012
Thanks!
@SadistiCeRen: Thank you so much! You helped me a lot. ^^
Kyrie
February 26th, 2012
Thank you!
@SadistiCeRen and @sisviss: thank you so much ^^
sisviss
February 20th, 2012
Lo Gue ha dicho--opossum
Lo gue deberia decir--

Espero que ayudo a
sisviss
February 20th, 2012
nada importante
Me encanta el comic tanto!
sisviss
February 20th, 2012
Grammer
Lo que dijo-- So you think is not serious Ah?

Debe ser-- So you think it it not serious eh?

Espero que esto ayude! mi español no es bueno
Kyrie
February 6th, 2012
@Cherri: En serio? Genial! jeje no creo que lo hayas olvidado, tal vez solo te falta con quien practicar :)

Yo no he tomado cursos pero sé hablarlo un poco :)

Pero la escritura es otra cosa, nada mas me se los silabarios y como 20 tristes kanji ^^;
Kyrie
February 6th, 2012
@Cherri: Gracias Cherri! Ya tiene tiempo lo empece a traducir, para practicar mi ingles que esta para llorar XD
SadistiCeRen
February 4th, 2012
Good job on the comedy ^_^
SadistiCeRen
February 4th, 2012
ERRORS
This is the only manga I'm still reading right now(still can't find a manga more interesting) ^_^ so you can't avoid my criticisms. But its for your own good as an author.

1. GIRL: "There are so many weird people in this world" must be, "There are so many weird people in this world." or "There's so many weird people in this world." - proper punctuation marks are a necessity.

2. BOY WITH ARMBAND: "Why took you so long?" must be, "What took you so long?"

3: The word CLOYING, that word is rarely used, some audience might get confused if its an actual word. You may use 'too sweet'
example: "Stop being too sweet!"

All in all the plot and characters are great and unique :D
SadistiCeRen
February 4th, 2012
ERROR
When she asked: "So you think is not serious Ah?"
it's supposed to be: "So you think it's not serious, eh?" don't capitalize unnecessarily ^_^
that's all
SadistiCeRen
February 4th, 2012
@delryyy: LOL