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SK Minxie, 21 Sep 2007 01:53 pm

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Ah...
I just read your comic over from the beginning. It's nice to see how much you've improved X3

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Chafing the Hide (Guest), 12 Sep 2007 12:46 am

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Stop being so self-conscious about your comics. xD

As these stylistically evolve I find that how much I enjoy them amplifies. There's an effective realism, which nicely skirts the cynical and oft-disheartening dimension [for some] of other media. As an older brother, the interplay between Ray and Grace is nostalgic and relatable, though I dare say that in my case it would be more abrasive, haha.

Keep up the good work!

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minaa, 11 Sep 2007 03:37 am

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I apologize for this being so late and sloppy x_x I am testing out a slightly different drawing method, that's sketchier. And, I started my school year. So I've been very busy. However, this is done, so please enjoy, despite the flaws (that I'm very aware of ;; ).

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remington, 17 Aug 2007 06:04 pm

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Swirly smoke! Shiny helmet! Silly expressions! Nice work.

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Hide Be Chafed (Guest), 17 Aug 2007 02:29 am

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Without the backgrounds, these comics wouldn't be half as good as they are. You should consider fleshing them out even more, then you'd have something truly epic on your hands.

xD

I -really- enjoyed this one. I already mentioned what Ray on the motor cycle reminded me of, but what I didn't say is that I can't help thinking of the various celebrities throughout the years who've driven them and seriously injured themselves (SURPRISE). The teasing aspect really hit home--I'm often a culprit and a recipient, and it's always fun to see it materialize in other facets.

Keep up the good work, Mina!