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PMD: Victory Fire
Sometimes the most interesting stories come from the strangest places. Victory Fire starts off as most Mystery Dungeon comics do, a human comes to the pokemon world. But THAT'S where the similarities end....

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Comment on 336: Tired
XNerd2, 21 Apr 2015 05:45 pm
I think Zilanth is full of it, sure it isn't that accurate to how dreams really work. However, between Darkrai, who's entire raison d'etre is dream manipulation and the almighty king of brute forcing psychic powers that is Mewtwo, it can DEFINITELY be as coherent as it is now.

Besides, I'd rather not spend what would be the next few months, at the current update rate, trying to decipher some bit of useful information out of what is essentially complete gibberish. There are GOOD reasons why 99% of writers intentionally don't write things like dreams and hallucinations properly, most of them have to do with actually being able to deliver the narrative in a timely and coherent manner. I honestly think this is the best part (so far) of the plot, and the art has been consistently amazing, so keep it coming!
Comment on 336: Tired
Guest, 21 Apr 2015 01:25 pm
Hmmm the possibilities of "her" are loverina, jen and victini.....i say it's victini
Comment on 336: Tired
PJSam, 21 Apr 2015 09:05 am
Could it be that he is referring to Lovrina?
Comment on 336: Tired
MiniDragonfly, 21 Apr 2015 08:47 am
By "her", does Darkrai mean Jen or someone else?
Also, poor Darkrai needs a break.
Comment on 336: Tired
missingno way (Guest), 21 Apr 2015 08:24 am
*spoiler alert*
victini is j-*gets hit by a bus*
Comment on 336: Tired
Guest, 21 Apr 2015 06:28 am
Victini is a she?
Anyway upon rereading this chapter draws paralel between Jen and Gengar. Both asked help to Gengar, and Jen also said the same words 'I don't know what to do' and the chapter title is 'Tired'.
So the two aren't so different
Comment on 336: Tired
Axies, 21 Apr 2015 05:41 am
In the defense on the dream sequence, I felt dragging it out would become boring and needlessly extend the plot. Can you imagine twenty or so pages of this. While it would certainly provide more of a dreamy feel, I just think we're better off not getting dragged down in the details.

Also, I wonder if Victini needs to open that vault or something for a good reason.
Comment on 336: Tired
Ziliath (Guest), 21 Apr 2015 04:25 am
Long time no post.

I gotta say, you didn't write this part very well. not that a coherent narrative is not warranted in most of the story, but its the nature of a dream that makes it "fragmented", "scattered", "broken", "Intermittent", "Shifting" and most often "silent". a dream is not a coherent narrative as shown in the last 3 pages. a dream is a haze of consciousness and should be written as such.

if ya wanna say "they're psychic Pokemon and can control the dream world" and go with it... Ok... i can accept that. but that's just a lazy way to not have to deal with the true nature of a dream (not that im actually accusing you guys of that, i dont think it was delebrite); and get really creative. delver the narrative through a series fragmented images and actions instead of dialog, and have as few words as possible.
(im not saying none)

a lot of TV show writers don't really know how to write dream sequences to better reflect dreams in reality, and most of them go with a "false awaking" style narrative. but when you go with a extended conversation in a dream is when i cringe, when was the last time you could talk in your dream-state in any coherent narrative?

i'm still enjoying this comic, and i hope this is taken as constrictive criticism.
Comment on 335: Cipher Lab B
Goosygander (Guest), 18 Apr 2015 10:24 pm
He looks like he's about to cry! :(
Oh that's awesome. I never once thought that I might love Darkrai as a character. Now I'll have to agree with everyone else that said he needs ahug.
Comment on 335: Cipher Lab B
Jennifer (Guest), 18 Apr 2015 09:50 pm
Aaaawwww poor Darkrai, he looks so terrified


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