The Black Bird

A bl/yaoi sketch webcomic that revolves around Irie Lloyd, a supposed-to-be normal 19-year old college student, turned out to be a reincarnation of "Raven". Raven is one of the oldest noble pureblood vampire known as the Black Bird. His bestfriend, Ian, who turns out to be an Astral Fox. The cat he's petting for years, Lily, who turns out to be his old familiar back then (a cat demon spectre). And the wolf who he sealed for long time, Lyall, who turns out to be his past lover. What will happen to Irie's normal human life? Would it remain the same? What are the secrets to be told about his own whole-being?

A Story about A vampire, A wolf, A fox and A cat on Quadrangle Love Affair.

Read from LEFT to RIGHT please. Thank you.

Recent Comments

UPDATE
IS THIS EVER GOING TO UPDATE
Bella1234
December 19th, 2016
oh
PLEASE UPDATE I NEED
FallenNight
August 29th, 2016
wow! so good! Even if this haven't updated in a long time, re reading this is never boring. hope you come back soon.
'Ryn
April 12th, 2015
Proofreading
"I absolutely won't let them to get "him" once again."
Should be either:
1. "I absolutely won't let them get "him" once again."
2. "I absolutely won't allow them to get "him" once again."

Also consider dropping the "once" - it would sound more emphatic without it.

"it is about time for him and that guy awakening afterall"
should be:
"it is about time for him and that guy to awaken after all."

"our 1st subject"
should be:
"our first subject"

Avoid using numbers in dialog unless it's something like an apartment number or license plate.

"we could stay longer"
should be:
"we can stay longer"
'Ryn
April 12th, 2015
Proofreading
"Tell me what yer guys plannin'"
Um... this one's confusing.
1. "Tell me what you guys are plannin'"
2. "Tell me what your guy is plannin'"
'Ryn
April 12th, 2015
Proofreading
"What's cute in him?"
Should be:
"What's cute about him?"

"My life is [ ] thin"
I don't even know what that word is.
'Ryn
April 12th, 2015
Proofreading
"Well I kinda prefer this kind of lifestyle than being an eye candy"
Should be:
"Well, I kinda prefer this kind of lifestyle over being eye candy"
Also:
You seem to use "well" a lot, keep an eye on that.

"I can feel their gazes at me"
should be:
"I can feel their gazes on me"

"Well except for this certain guy"
should be:
"Well, except for one certain guy"

"For some reason he likes me to hang out with."
Should be either:
1. "For some reason he likes to hang out with me" <- Recommended.
2. "For some reason he likes me to hang out with him."

"oppossite"
Should be:
"opposite"

Maybe put parenthesis around the LOL?

"This scene is like from one of your school dramas"
Should be either:
1. "This scene is like something from one of your school dramas."
2. "This scene is like something out of a school drama." <- Recommended.
'Ryn
April 12th, 2015
Proofreading
"what could be any boring than this?"
should be:
"what could be more boring than this?"

"Well, Gazelth is my family's surname - well you could say, a foreign name in this country"

1. Get rid of a "well" - try not to reuse the same words too close together (doesn't count for words like "to" or "the").
2. Placement of the second comma is weird.


"I tried to be so simple and dull everytime I go out."
Should be:
1. "I've tried to be so simple and dull every time I go out."
2. "I try to be so simple and dull every time I go out."

"People can get easily attracted by one's looks, and not puttin' on airs,"
Should be:
"People can get easily attracted by one's looks and, not putting on airs,"

"many people do go after me since I was a kid."
Should be:
"many people have gone after me since I was a kid."
'Ryn
April 12th, 2015
Proofreading
"I feel so retard"
Should be:
"I feel so retarded"
BUT!
While "retard" or "retarded" literally means "slow" it used to be used to describe developmental delay (retarded development = slowed development), and eventually started being used as in insult akin to "stupid." At this point it's a very horrible thing to call someone, and is used as an ableist slur against people with conditions like Down Syndrome and Autistic Spectrum Disorders.

In other words, regardless of which meaning you intended, you should probably just avoid using this word.
'Ryn
April 12th, 2015
Proofreading
"lonesome wolf"
Correct if your intent is to convey that he actually wants to be with others, but "lone wolf" is what you want if the intention is just to say that he keeps to himself.

"would you want to come with me?"
Sounds awkward in this context.
1. "do you want to come with me?"
2. "would you like to come with me?"

"you didn't even flinched"
This should be either:
1. "you don't even flinch" <- Recommended
2. "you haven't even flinched"

("you didn't even flinch" is another grammatically correct option, but the tense doesn't really work with "even after seeing")
WOAH-HO
I'm already thinking that this should be a BL otome game from the front page. xDD
Wow
at first I thought this was stupid and was going to stop but now I wanna keep reading! so good! Kepp up the good work I love this comic.
Yo-Yo
March 29th, 2015
O.O "Procreate" . . . . Two male characters. . . . Oh boy, you're gonna' have fun explaining how that's gonna' work.
Omg! How long until the next lunar eclipse!!!
1-otaku-posts
March 28th, 2015
Yesh!!!!!!!
anrebkyo1990
March 28th, 2015
THANK YOU FOR THE WAIT.
IM SORRY FOR 1 PAGE UPDATE ;U; IM TRYING TO SQUEEZE MOAR TIME. :D I WAS SO BUSY REDOING THE STORY FRAMES. IM TRYING NOT TO RUSH EVERYTHING IN REGARDS WITH BACKSTORIES AND SUCH. THANK YOU FOR BEARING WITH ME GUYS. I LOVE YOU <3

THANKS FOR SUPPORT.
anrebkyo1990
March 28th, 2015
THANK YOU <3
@Foreverhawk -- haha thank you hun ;u; I appreciate it so so soo much. I'll try to be fast on updates. <3

@Alybee271@gmail.com -- thank you hun. :3 Yesh, irie's brother will come soon, more screentime for him :D
I'm so looking forward to Irie meeting his real brother and possibly some other things going down around the same time. (^=^)
Foreverhawk
March 22nd, 2015
Keep it up
Keep it up, the story so far is amazing! Hope you get better&#128516;. I can't wait for more backstory!
anrebkyo1990
March 21st, 2015
THE DELAY. ;v; THANK YOU AND SORRY.
im sorry for delays. i always win at delaying stuffs ;v;
I've been sickly last week so my mom forbid me to do anything like going to spend to my precious computer at rest day. I just got off the hook since my skin isn't as pale as it is before. Thank you for support ;u; I LOVE YOU GUYS :D xoxo