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Up and Down

by LuckyDucky
This story takes place in a pretty rotten city. Pollution is everywhere. Shooting and murder are the daily deal. Illegal services, experiments, weapons, drugs, etc are everywhere. This story will be told in different perspectives. One perspective is told from our main characters, 2 cops. Another perspective is told from XXX and XXX (don't wanna spoil xD) So basicly, there's 3 perspectives in which this story will be told. It is going to be a long one... and I really hope I'll be able to complete it one day... be that be in a year or 3 years. I'm going to take my darned sweet time. xD

Updates when I have time and/or when I'm in the mood. Normally, when I update, I try to update multiple pages at once. (as in draw one, update, draw another, update) I can't promise the completion, but I will try my best to finish it.

Contains BL, it's a heads up for those who dislike it or feels offended by it. There might be inappropriate jokes, etc, and profanity and violence. This is just a comic so please don't use it as a role model.....

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103
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6 Years Ago
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This story takes place in a pretty rotten city. Pollution is everywhere. Shooting and murder are the daily deal. Illegal services, experiments, weapons, drugs, etc are everywhere. This story will be told in different perspectives. One perspective is told from our main characters, 2 cops. Another perspective is told from XXX and XXX (don't wanna spoil xD) So basicly, there's 3 perspectives in which this story will be told. It is going to be a long one... and I really hope I'll be able to complete it one day... be that be in a year or 3 years. I'm going to take my darned sweet time. xD

Updates when I have time and/or when I'm in the mood. Normally, when I update, I try to update multiple pages at once. (as in draw one, update, draw another, update) I can't promise the completion, but I will try my best to finish it.

Contains BL, it's a heads up for those who dislike it or feels offended by it. There might be inappropriate jokes, etc, and profanity and violence. This is just a comic so please don't use it as a role model.....

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LuckyDucky
November 29th, 2013
http://www.smackjeeves.com/comicprofile.php?id=140374

Uhh... restarting again.... Hopefully it will come out better.... man... 4th time the charm?
gentlechaos
May 18th, 2013
@LuckyDucky: Aaaaaahrg! noooooo :( really sad... But if you want to pick it up someday, I'll be waiting!!! *cue dramatic music*
@Kveta: I'm glad it made you laugh>? xD
@ayumuXryou: Lol, thanks, and sorry D=
i you're inerested in my opinion i found the original hilarious because it didn't make sense :) i really liked how they made the possible pedo an officer just because they needed staff and all that :( but it's your decision to make...
ayumuXryou
May 15th, 2013
noooooooooooo :'( you can't be serious :( why does it always have to be the good ones that are dropped?
ayumuXryou
May 15th, 2013
sorry if i'm annoying but i just have to point out that perfectly drawn hand :D
ayumuXryou
May 15th, 2013
i really love this story <3
and thanks a lot for converting the heights :) i will never understand inch and foot :S
LuckyDucky
May 14th, 2013
@gentlechaos: xD It doesn't make you look like an idiot o-o And you have a huge point there, and I'm glad you love my comic, but it's dropped, sorry D=
gentlechaos
May 14th, 2013
@LuckyDucky: he, that's fortunate :D what I actually wanted to say was that I think you mean a 180° turn, as 360° is a whole circle, which would mean that he ends up right where he started off and not changing his personality at all xDD buuut I'm being nitpicky again, we all get what you are trying to say, don't be angry /:O I love your comic!
Oh, and just saying, I've seen, read, heard, or watched worse PUBLISHED FOR PROFIT media than this one. Sometimes I grimace and think, "Why is this selling? Was the author ever even thinking about the plotline?" Take that however you wish. :) Seriously, it takes a lot to admit you made a mistake in the process of making something like this, and especially when you are making motions to improve what you've started many times over.
Your authors note...nothing to say except it was hilarious. At "facedesk" I just lost it and was smiling from then on. I have the same problem when I'm thinking up plot lines, and I must admit, doing copious research is a must when there's little you know about a subject and just have a rough outline. This story was interesting enough that I wanted to see where it went, but if it's going nowhere, I approve (tsk, why am I giving you approval? Not really my place, is it?) you dropping this. In my humble opinion, art like this is supposed to be a stress reliever, not something that amplifies your stress levels. Drop it or not. If it happens, it happens. If not, oh well. Keep on persevering, blah blah blah, et cetera.
I took out the other 2 pages because it wasn't necessary >.<.

Anyway, I think this comic might be dropped... I liked the characters... just not the story T-T The mystery here is really bad, like I think you'd be able to guess the plot twists and stuff. Another thing is how the story doesn't make sense and is confusing etc.

And tbh, in the beginning, this was supposed to be a comedy. Except after I redid it it had like 0 comedy scenes. So then I wish i didn't restart and just picked off where the original left, but then the story made no fking sense... so then I'm like -facedesk-

Next, I think this story idea doesn't suit BL... IF I don't drop it, and make like... a complete redo. (may or may not happen because I don't know) I might not make it a BL. The reason I liked making Up and Down was because I liked the setting and the characters, but the story... is just ek....

I mean, I have the rest of this chapter written out, but imo, it's just a chapter with toilet humor and a bad plot twist.

I THINK, I should actually do some research and find an ACTUAL city similar to this, then read a bunch of crime stories xD Then write the WHOLE STORY out instead of chapter by chapter. (and maybe put it on wattpad or something)

I think some of you might be thinking, "why do you work on your other comics but not this one?!" Well, Bleeding Hearts was a cliche cheesy one shot... Knife has an ending in sight and the end was really the only thing I looked forward to. EEE is on hold and I need to rethink the story. (again, story problems) Up and Down had the most issues REGARDING the plot, because, it's HARD to try writing a mystery that makes sense, have the characters develop (why do you think I gave them shetty personalities?), and avoid toilet humor and chiche'ness.

I'm not really a writer... and I don't even consider myself an artist. I just wanted to try writing a BL with a story.... which didn't work out... BUT I... Idk....

At first, the problem was the art, and I constantly annoyed you guys with complaints >.<, but then I think I should have put more effort into it. Because even if I had bad art, I could have still made it look neat and screentoned and typed out the words... Hey, but I didn't do that so "no point crying over un-spilled milk", right?

Then people told me the story didn't make sense, and I reread it and it really didn't make much sense... and then I put up a bunch of hiatus stuff with a bunch of excuses. And kept restarting... so I'm really hesitant to keep restarting on this and getting people's hopes up then crashing them, so I think I might have to drop this...

Again, this sounds like me complaining and "looking for attention" I'm NOT. I'm telling you how I feel about this comic and why I'm dropping it. I need to have a reason even if it sounds like a bunch of excuses. I'm not expecting people to say "ohhhz it's okaayyyzzzz, the story is grreeaaaatttzzzz!"

ASDFHASDHGAJHGSD Why is it that whenever I quit this dam story, I wanna restart on it and pick up on it, but when i'm actually on the story, I wanna drop it? ASDFASDFASDFASDF CURSE YOU CRUEL WORLD. MUST> RESISTS> TEMPTATION>
LuckyDucky
May 12th, 2013
@gentlechaos: Unfortunately, I didn't =/
gentlechaos
May 9th, 2013
lol, I hope you didnt read my comment before I deleted it. made me look like an idiot. but to my defense, I'm drunk! heavily drunk!!
gentlechaos
May 9th, 2013
@LuckyDucky: hahaha "What was your name again?" *takes pen*
LuckyDucky
April 13th, 2013
The last panel: It isn't yaoi big hand syndrome, it's just a failed shot of perspective.
@LuckyDucky: Not a problem :)
AsianIdiot16
April 7th, 2013
What if it was like "Welcome to Fatpig Town. Home of the tiny koalas."
Quadrant
April 6th, 2013
Could've been heterochromia iridium, but as he said not that common.