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Dragon Ball Z AF

by DragonBallLesner
DBZ
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Rushaos
February 25th, 2014
Garlic Gun?

That sounds delicious.
Rushaos
February 25th, 2014
KAKAROKU BEHIND Y- Oh damnit Gokarot there goes your nose
DragonBallLesner
November 24th, 2013
@so...: Awesome Love To Here Something To Help Me Get Better Thanks For Advise
DragonBallLesner
November 24th, 2013
@Rushaos: Nahh Goku Had A Flash Back Of His ChildHood
DragonBallLesner
November 24th, 2013
@Rushaos: IDK
DragonBallLesner
November 24th, 2013
@Rushaos: Taunting Time :D
DragonBallLesner
November 24th, 2013
@Rushaos: Lol Awesome
Rushaos
November 18th, 2013
Since when could Vegeta go SSJ4 by himself?
Rushaos
November 18th, 2013
Vegeta is really Krillin?!?!?!??!
Rushaos
November 18th, 2013
What's a flair?
Rushaos
November 18th, 2013
Panel 2

What

Just what

Why are they all happy and shit?
Rushaos
November 18th, 2013
Krillin look out, it's gonna vaporize your nuts
Rushaos
November 18th, 2013
Panel 1 Krillin and Panel 2 Krillin and Panel Two Background

SO FINE

SUCH RESIZE

SO HIP
so... (Guest)
November 5th, 2013
Hi, local critic here. I gotta say you're one of few who'll try doing a DBZ sprite comic and I'm glad you're doing it. The series is awesome..

But anyway, you have a few problems here.

1. Grammar/Punctuation: You're Gonna Need To Avoid Making Every Single Word With A Capital Letter Like This.

2. This isn't a major problem, but if you were to make your comics with fighting in it longer so you could fit in more poses for fighting and then make the choreography for it a little more smooth. Though I personally think you were doing okay, it's something to keep in mind.

3. ...The special effects in this comic, with the charging up? What was going on there? You should maybe get a program that helps you make that effect look better, and don't let it escape the panels or it'll obstruct the view of the other panels like it did in panels 2 and 4 here. Or you could find another aura sprite to use.

By the way, why is Vegeta suddenly SSJ4? It'll probably be explained in a later issue but right now it makes no sense.

Anyway, I'll keep an eye on this comic as it progresses. You're doing alright so far, keep it up.
DragonBallLesner
November 4th, 2013
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