Princess Retribution

Princess Retribution

by TriaElf9
Three princesses, Celyse, Linne, and Hana, are each happily in love, until their betrotheds are taken from them by three evil queens. Now, they must go on a quest to defeat the queens and rescue their true loves.

Short story, 5 chapters long
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Princess Retribution

Three princesses, Celyse, Linne, and Hana, are each happily in love, until their betrotheds are taken from them by three evil queens. Now, they must go on a quest to defeat the queens and rescue their true loves.

Short story, 5 chapters long

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@D: The Queens aren't married ^_^;; It's just their lair, and they are hanging out together at the moment b/c they needed to work together to capture the people they wanted.
Why (at least) 3 queens live in 1 castle? I would understand 2 as same sex marriages appear to be common in this world, but 3?
P.S.
If queens are evil, that explains why these princesses haven't got married yet. I knew that marriage turns people evil. Happy single live, here I come.
D (Guest)
April 14th, 2016
@TriaElf9: Then it would make more sense for them to sit in the middle of longer side of table: you can reach more cakes that way.
TriaElf9
December 15th, 2014
@Shei-kun: AHAh more punching, more chooms and some new slicing, from Sasha! ^_-

Yay, glad to hear! That's one of my favs too ^_^
Clearly
More punchings are needed. Also, more Chooms. Which has quickly become one of my favorite sound effects.
TriaElf9
December 14th, 2014
@Hermit: Thank you so much, I'm so glad you like it! ^_^ I hope I can do more like this, I do have some more original stories in the works, hopefully my patreon and the kickstarter will take off so that I can drop everything else and just do awesome comics ^_^

DRAT, really good catch there, it was not intentional, that was just a total brain fart on my part >_< I'll get that fixed! ^_^;
I love the fact that this little adventure story is the inverse of what usually happens, girl(s) saves guy(s). It's a rather refreshing change of pace that I really enjoy. I hope there will be more original stories from you in the future. On a side note: Was it intentional for the guard of Linne's sword to be upside down on chapter five's cover?
TriaElf9
December 9th, 2014
@hkmaly: It's a lot more complicated than that, the reason it did so much damage was less from the initial explosion and more from the shock wave bouncing back off the valley walls, since Hiroshima is in a valley. Nagasaki took less damage because the blast was not contained. Actually, I've been to the spot where the bob went off, it's over a tiny graveyard a few blocks away, the dome was a little off to the side, but again, yeah, a little off topic.

Anywho, Ceylse didn't set off a bomb. Currently she has only burny powers and they've left the castle in not pristine condition.
@TriaElf9: Look at some before and after images. It's counterintuitive, but the dome is one of few buildings left standing, BECAUSE the bomb exploded ABOVE it and therefore the force went downwards. Lot of buildings around were totalled, INCLUDING the Hiroshima Castle (although it apparently wasn't instant, explosion "just" destroyed some pillars and castle collapsed as a result ; also, the castle was mostly from wood). And that was SMALL nuclear bomb.

(Some report from Nagasaki: "The wreckage of a church, approximately 1,800 feet east of X in Nagasaki, was one of the few masonry buildings still recognizable and only portions of the walls of this structure were left standing. These walls were extremely thick (about 2 feet).")

I'm not sure if someone actually tried to destroy stone and mortar castle with atomic bomb (I mean, most castles are relic, but people testing atomic bomb might've have less respect of history), but I wouldn't bet on it left standing.

.... but, that's going little offtopic ...
TriaElf9
December 6th, 2014
@hkmaly: That might give her a level up, but currently it's not on the level of any sort of dragon fire or anything like that.

Ah, yeah, haven't seen it.

Well, yeah, a lot of older castles if they're not kept up will just fall apart over time. But yeah, I meant that the castle is in ruins rather than it is totalled or flattened ^_^

I've been to Hiroshima, and seen the dome and even with something of that magnitude, the dome still resembles a building. It wasn't directed at it, but it takes a lot to take down a building, much less a stone and mortar castle (instantly at least)
@TriaElf9: Maybe with next spell focus tome?

No no, not read, see. It's not in book (or at least I didn't find it there), but it is in the TV series.

I didn't said that. I only said that it wasn't the case of castle ruins I visited. Possibly due to people conquering them not having enough bombs and magic.

... I mean, I didn't visited Hiroshima Castle ... and they rebuild it in 1958 anyway ...
I said that just cutting the arms was not enough!
@melaredblu: AHAH It's true! ^_^ Eten and Varik will be in the comic, but they won't be on the quest, since they'll be staying behind to watch over things while the girls go a-questing.

I'm excited to write Sasha more, especially since she has been so quiet so far ^_^

AHAH, well, the kickstarter still has to succeed first ^_^;; Hopefully people will be enough into seeing this story that they'll share it all over ahah
Shut up and take my money!
Well, this promises to be an interesting story. Who could the enemy be, indeed? Hmm...we never did see what Celyse did to Rosanne.

We didn't learn much about Sasha, so it might be kind of neat to learn more about her, but I wonder if Eten and Varik will also help out. If nothing else, they could be moral support, haha!

Oh yes, definitely gonna buy a print copy, but first I gotta get money. Bah.
The Kickstarter is over, but the book can be purchased here: http://triaelf9.storenvy.com/ ^__^


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So there we go, the bonus story will feature Sasha being awesome, with Hana and Celyse, and very possibly more cuteness and even a wedding! (I mean, unless all goes terribly and Sasha doesn't rescue Linne ^_- ) And all new outfits too! :P

This image will be the chapter title page for the story, but it will be retoned and in black and white for the book. This colored version will ONLY be featured in the art book as of now (minus the text of course).

This story will NOT be available outside of the book/digital copy of the book, so that's your only chance to read it! If you'd like a copy, the kickstarter is running until the 30th! ^_^

https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/372273309/princess-retribution-the-graphic-n ovel
TriaElf9
December 5th, 2014
@hkmaly: Well, Celyse's fire is none of those things ^_^;; And not read GoT either ^_^;;

Castle ruins and leaving a castle IN ruins are a totally different usage of the word. The insides are trashed and bits are on fire, but it's not like they set off a bomb and leveled the area, and as you say, the ruins from over thousands of years are very hard to pull off in a couple of hours ^_^;;
@TriaElf9: Hard, but not impossible. For fantasy reference, see Games of Thrones: "What kind of fire can burn stone? Dragon fire". If you want something more scientific, Chlorine Trifluoride will set SAND on fire. Dioxygen Difluoride can react explosively when liquid at -180C. Like, for example with water ice. (See the "Things I Won't Work With" blog by Derek Lowe)

... and that still not totalling the castle.

I've been at lot of castle ruins where only parts of two walls were still standing and without signboards you wouldn't recognize well from tower. Granted, it was mostly caused by several centuries without maintenance, not several minutes of heroes visit.
@mjkj: Thank you so much! ^_^
The cover looks great :D
As it says above, the kickstarter is still on, until December 30th! ^_^ This is the cover art (though not fully completed cover...it will be very similar to this though ^_^ )

It will contain all 5 chapters, as well as a bonus story, that I'll be posting more about when I get the promo ready (super excited about this btw, can't wait to post it!

So yes, check out the kickstarter for awesome rewards, show your support for these types of stories, and the better the kickstarter does, the more of these fun stories I can do!

https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/372273309/princess-retribution-the-graphic-n ovel

Don't forget to pass it on as well, the more eyes who see it, the better!