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le Vite

by Karlijn
Hiroshi loves his family. Today he'll visit his sister Amaya in prison, but things don't go quite as they were planned when he leaves. The "who dunnit" aspect is the main focus of most detectives, for the people close to the victems the "why dunnit" may be more important. The past can't be changed but maybe Hiroshi and his family can learn to understand it.

The comic will, for the biggest part, be in colour and it's made entirely traditionally.
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Hiroshi loves his family. Today he'll visit his sister Amaya in prison, but things don't go quite as they were planned when he leaves. The "who dunnit" aspect is the main focus of most detectives, for the people close to the victems the "why dunnit" may be more important. The past can't be changed but maybe Hiroshi and his family can learn to understand it.

The comic will, for the biggest part, be in colour and it's made entirely traditionally.

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At least they now have someone to share their family drama with :)
We're going into the last short scene of the chapter!
kidcthulhu
October 8th, 2017
@Karlijn: I actually like this page, even if the dialog raises several red flags...

As long as either comic gets updates, I'll be happy ^_^
Karlijn
October 8th, 2017
Literally no one trusts or knows Ylva. Amaya probably made an escape plan as soon as she met Ylva.
Last page for today, only about 4 pages left in this chapter! I don't know if I'm going to start the next chapter before trying to finish a Another Love Song chapter. We'll see :)

Can't say I like this page, because of multiple reasons. Guess it isn't my worst page either, it'll have to do.
Karlijn
October 2nd, 2017
@kidcthulhu: Ooh I was thinking of real people, of course I know your Olivia! She has the cutest curls :)
@Karlijn: Olivia Branch is one of my characters in Tangentville *^_^*
Karlijn
October 1st, 2017
@kidcthulhu: You probably are right not to :)
And who knows, anything could happen!
Karlijn
October 1st, 2017
@kidcthulhu: I don't know who that is, but I do enjoy drawing Bente's hair!
You're right about that, I'm just a bit stressed.
@Karlijn: I love Bente's hair in the last panel. Those ringlets remind me a little of Olivia Branch ^_^

Don't give up. Even if you skim the material, you're bound to pick up something. It's better than going in completely cold.
kidcthulhu
October 1st, 2017
@Karlijn: I still don't trust Ylva...

And now given Amaya's new dye-job, I'm half-expecting her to pull a Single White Female on Ylva...
Karlijn
October 1st, 2017
Double update since I didn't feel like updating last week.

I love my girls, they are each so different but still beautiful <3 Ylva is a bit strange, what's up with her? Who knows... Still, she's not even the weirdest girl in the story.
Karlijn
October 1st, 2017
Everyone's sharing their thoughts about what happened and what should happen. Who knows what the best solution could be?
With this chapter I finally feel like the story is going somewhere, I don't know WHERE but SOMEWHERE.

Apparently my first exams of the year start next week, I didn't know that. I read maybe 3 chapters in total for both courses, I don't know how I'm going to read about 14 more in just 3 days... My brain pretty much gave up.
Karlijn
September 18th, 2017
@kidcthulhu: Thanks! Let's hope her twin sister can be trusted.
kidcthulhu
September 17th, 2017
Happy 20th, Karlijin ^_^

Good page, BTW. I don't fully trust Ylva either.
Karlijn
September 17th, 2017
I'm so frustrated with Miwako's face, something's definitely wrong but I couldn't figure out what so I just went with it. Sometimes I get one of those panels I just can't fix no matter how often I redraw them, this was one of them.
Next Friday is my birthday, yaaaay! I'll no longer be a teenager next week :)
Karlijn
September 12th, 2017
@kidcthulhu: Colouring is the most fun part usually! The pages look very unfinished to me before I add the colours.

That's great to hear! As someone who had to learn other languages in school I never understood how native English speakers could make so many mistakes (like messing up they're, their and there??), but I surely mess up other parts so I can't really judge.
kidcthulhu
September 11th, 2017
@Karlijn: Another great page! I admire the way you stick to doing full color. My previous webcomic was traditionally drawn and in full color; I was burnt out by page 36 or so.

Personally, I think your dialog is fine. It's better English than some of my coworkers (and it's their only language!).
Karlijn
September 11th, 2017
Only about 8 more pages in this chapter!
When I first wrote this chapter the dialogue seemed very stiff, no human (especially a teenager) talks like that! I changed it a bit and that's how Miwako's first speech bubble happened. I wish I had a more thorough understanding of the English language and its slang so I could use that when writing dialogue.
Karlijn
September 9th, 2017
@skyangel: Thanks! Traditional mediums make mood setting a lot easier but it can look messy.
Karlijn
September 9th, 2017
@skyangel: There's actually one more chapter, chapter 5 is the current chapter :)
skyangel
September 7th, 2017
Very interesting!!!