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Pokemon: Stars and Smoke

Pokemon: Stars and Smoke

Welcome to Pokémon: Stars and Smoke, a choose your own adventure comic guided by the community and a ton of improvisation!

This comic follows the adventures of two young Pokémon - Pearl and Rayfi - who are on opposite sides of an ever-raging war. By default, they are enemies.
Of course, that means you'll be able to see the story from both sides' point of view - an interesting concept riddling this story with some very, very, hard decisions.
Think carefully about which moves you'll make - this comic is based on thinking!
Have fun!
I have no idea how this is going to go :3
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Pokemon: Stars and Smoke

Welcome to Pokémon: Stars and Smoke, a choose your own adventure comic guided by the community and a ton of improvisation!

This comic follows the adventures of two young Pokémon - Pearl and Rayfi - who are on opposite sides of an ever-raging war. By default, they are enemies.
Of course, that means you'll be able to see the story from both sides' point of view - an interesting concept riddling this story with some very, very, hard decisions.
Think carefully about which moves you'll make - this comic is based on thinking!
Have fun!
I have no idea how this is going to go :3

Recent Comments

WildfireK
December 2nd, 2017
OH MY RAYFI WHAT IS THIS ABOMINATION



THIS IS AWFULLLL
Noice! Though you do have a few problems with meter that detract from the smoothness of the poem. I really like how much symbolism you put into it.
@WildfireK: Both of them!
@RealBoxTheEevee:
Lol it was a sprite comoc bwefore it was drawb
@WildfireK: Wait, wut nuw
@RealBoxTheEevee:
Old Sas or Old old Sas?
@WildfireK: upload them all plz
I like reading Old Sas
@RealBoxTheEevee:
Old SaS?
Well, it has like 50 pagesx so I'm gonna have to upload them all Xp
1. ;_; awww

2. is it possible for us to see the comic's pages from the past?
@HollyTheFluffyCat:
Okay fren

Are you se-*attackes by Coalblaze*
@ShadowStalker1128:
Yes that exactly it
Rayfi and Nira - help grab everything in your room and put it in this luggage - we'll drive over to our new home in an hour, so be done fast

Nira: So where are we moving again?

Me: Oh, just across the street. We're going to live in that dump I own

Nira: ...oh.
Welp, time to upgrade this Silver Shovel by burying a second planet.
okie frendo!
Okay, I respect your descion. Time to move on to greener pastures!
Okay!
So, Stars and Smoke

Well, turns out I've lost motivation for it, and I think it's time to but this to rest -
Let me explain -
As a writer, sometimes when you write something - like a story or a comic - you change a lot of things on the spot, because you're improving, and what seemed like a good idea actually isn't anymore.
Well, that's what I've been doing with Stars and Smoke - I made the plot, didn't like it, remade the plot, didn't like it, made it a CYOA - and to be honest, the story is kind of a mess. It's not all symbolic and awesome like Lynxstar's Tyranny's plot is
Making it a CYOA was my attempt to override this, but I've lost motivation this soon in, so something isn't working.
I think I'll make Lynxstar's Tyranny my main comic, and continue posting comics on my art dump - because to be honest, doodling is much more fun than writing pages - when it's not Lynxstar's Tyranny, of course. Then it's fun.
You see, the story of SaS is something I've struggled with for a while because I've kept changing it. That being said, I love the characters with all my heart, and I won't let them crumble into dust. Be prepared to see a lot of Rayfi and Nira on my art dump :3
That means that SaS isn't truly gone - it just doesn't have a plot so far. The characters, however, will be a part of everyday life - so no reason to miss 'em!

That being said, check out my art dump (where you can see pages upon pages of Wiisp teasing me about Rubystar XD)
http://www.smackjeeves.com/comicprofile.php?id=168690

Of course, I wont delete Stars and Smoke. Never.
So you can come back whenever you like!

Peanut butter
And with that, I make my leave, flying away with Rubystar into the sunset.
Wheeee
WildfireK
July 14th, 2017
@WiispNightmare:
Haha lol
WiispNightmare
July 14th, 2017
@WildfireK: Well, I said three times, but yes.
WildfireK
July 14th, 2017
@WiispNightmare:
So wait
That must be awkward
"Hey say toyboat 5 times fast"
"What?"
WiispNightmare
July 14th, 2017
@WildfireK: I had someone who was passing by try it and they said the boit
it's kinda funny actually cx