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Pokemon: Stars and Smoke

Pokemon: Stars and Smoke

Welcome to Pokémon: Stars and Smoke, a choose your own adventure comic guided by the community and a ton of improvisation!

This comic follows the adventures of two young Pokémon - Pearl and Rayfi - who are on opposite sides of an ever-raging war. By default, they are enemies.
Of course, that means you'll be able to see the story from both sides' point of view - an interesting concept riddling this story with some very, very, hard decisions.
Think carefully about which moves you'll make - this comic is based on thinking!
Have fun!
I have no idea how this is going to go :3
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Pokemon: Stars and Smoke

Welcome to Pokémon: Stars and Smoke, a choose your own adventure comic guided by the community and a ton of improvisation!

This comic follows the adventures of two young Pokémon - Pearl and Rayfi - who are on opposite sides of an ever-raging war. By default, they are enemies.
Of course, that means you'll be able to see the story from both sides' point of view - an interesting concept riddling this story with some very, very, hard decisions.
Think carefully about which moves you'll make - this comic is based on thinking!
Have fun!
I have no idea how this is going to go :3

Recent Comments

Noice! Though you do have a few problems with meter that detract from the smoothness of the poem. I really like how much symbolism you put into it.
@WildfireK: Both of them!
@RealBoxTheEevee:
Lol it was a sprite comoc bwefore it was drawb
@WildfireK: Wait, wut nuw
@RealBoxTheEevee:
Old Sas or Old old Sas?
@WildfireK: upload them all plz
I like reading Old Sas
@RealBoxTheEevee:
Old SaS?
Well, it has like 50 pagesx so I'm gonna have to upload them all Xp
1. ;_; awww

2. is it possible for us to see the comic's pages from the past?
@HollyTheFluffyCat:
Okay fren

Are you se-*attackes by Coalblaze*
@ShadowStalker1128:
Yes that exactly it
Rayfi and Nira - help grab everything in your room and put it in this luggage - we'll drive over to our new home in an hour, so be done fast

Nira: So where are we moving again?

Me: Oh, just across the street. We're going to live in that dump I own

Nira: ...oh.
Welp, time to upgrade this Silver Shovel by burying a second planet.
okie frendo!
Okay, I respect your descion. Time to move on to greener pastures!
Okay!
So, Stars and Smoke

Well, turns out I've lost motivation for it, and I think it's time to but this to rest -
Let me explain -
As a writer, sometimes when you write something - like a story or a comic - you change a lot of things on the spot, because you're improving, and what seemed like a good idea actually isn't anymore.
Well, that's what I've been doing with Stars and Smoke - I made the plot, didn't like it, remade the plot, didn't like it, made it a CYOA - and to be honest, the story is kind of a mess. It's not all symbolic and awesome like Lynxstar's Tyranny's plot is
Making it a CYOA was my attempt to override this, but I've lost motivation this soon in, so something isn't working.
I think I'll make Lynxstar's Tyranny my main comic, and continue posting comics on my art dump - because to be honest, doodling is much more fun than writing pages - when it's not Lynxstar's Tyranny, of course. Then it's fun.
You see, the story of SaS is something I've struggled with for a while because I've kept changing it. That being said, I love the characters with all my heart, and I won't let them crumble into dust. Be prepared to see a lot of Rayfi and Nira on my art dump :3
That means that SaS isn't truly gone - it just doesn't have a plot so far. The characters, however, will be a part of everyday life - so no reason to miss 'em!

That being said, check out my art dump (where you can see pages upon pages of Wiisp teasing me about Rubystar XD)
http://www.smackjeeves.com/comicprofile.php?id=168690

Of course, I wont delete Stars and Smoke. Never.
So you can come back whenever you like!

Peanut butter
And with that, I make my leave, flying away with Rubystar into the sunset.
Wheeee
WildfireK
July 14th, 2017
@WiispNightmare:
Haha lol
WiispNightmare
July 14th, 2017
@WildfireK: Well, I said three times, but yes.
WildfireK
July 14th, 2017
@WiispNightmare:
So wait
That must be awkward
"Hey say toyboat 5 times fast"
"What?"
WiispNightmare
July 14th, 2017
@WildfireK: I had someone who was passing by try it and they said the boit
it's kinda funny actually cx
WildfireK
July 14th, 2017
@WiispNightmare:
Really?
Because most people get tripped up at the boat part
They say like toyboy or toyboit
Because saying bowtoy is equally hard
And when you say toyboatoyboat, you're also say bowtoy
But when you're saying toyboat, toyboat, you're saying toyboat, toyboat, not bowtoy - which makes it much easier