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Pokemon Betrayal

Pokemon Betrayal

by TheSpriterZ
After years of working as a Scientist for Team Rocket, a young man named Dan finally realizes what he's doing is wrong. He tries to leave the organization, but once you get in, you can't get out.
Dan will risk everything to live a normal life again.
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Pokemon Betrayal

After years of working as a Scientist for Team Rocket, a young man named Dan finally realizes what he's doing is wrong. He tries to leave the organization, but once you get in, you can't get out.
Dan will risk everything to live a normal life again.

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Interesting....
I like the "darker" tone this comic has set so far.
Could that special evolution stone have increased Grovyle's power?

Also you were in my neighborhood! Where in NYC were you staying?
Dan tries to make his way down to his lab to collect his Pokemon, until someone catches him...Will Dan be able to escape from this disaster and save his life?

HAPPY VERY LATE NEW YEARS! Sorry for the extremely long wait. I was on a trip to NYC for the past two weeks. It was really interesting to spend my first New Years outside of my home town. I hope to return soon, it was a lot of fun!
@WarWithin: I believe it was a critical hit, explaining the blood coming out of Electivire. Then again, it is Team Rocket, they're a pretty weak team.
@migasand: I guess the Shadows cover it, but originally there were stretch marks on the bed, indicating that there was someone underneath when in actuality it was just a well placed pillow. Also, Electivires electricity generated some light, that's how he saw grovyle.
I guess it's dark in there, otherwise they'd see there's no one in the bed. But then how come Electivire saw Grovyle in panel 4? Or did it sense him more than saw?
Also you might want to look for damage calculators on the internet in order to make more balanced battles :)

By the way, I love how you managed the 3D effect in the last panels.
One hit and it's down? That must be a weak electivire!
BETRAYAL
With the first Pokemon defeated by Grovyle, Dan begins his betrayal against Team Rocket! But how far will he get?

Anyone else somewhat confused by the new Smackjeeves layout? I like it but it's really confusing...
@Axan: Thanks!
Interesting!

I love how Deoxy's goes to such effort to warn him about the future, then is like "Meh you're probably going to die regardless if you wake up so at least I tried."

A FOR EFFORT DEOXYS!
Interesting how Deoxys refers to the world as "my world".
Dan gets informed of what happens in the future if his experiment gets to all of Team Rocket. Now, he has the power to change his fate and save the world!
Trouble is, how is he going to do that with no Pokemon?

Thanks to all you people who read my comics and keep me motivated to keep posting!
@WarWithin: Thank you!
@TheSpriterZ: I think you are doing fine so far. It's way to early to critique the "story" seeing as you only have posted 3 pages. And your sprite work is fine! Your emotions on the characters look great, even more detailed than mine. And your text bubbles are A+!

It seems as though this "SpriteCritic" is doing this to a few other comics, including mine.

Keep up the good work and don't let it affect your story/spriting!!
@SpriteCritic: I guess I could, The script is reviewed a few times and changed a lot before I post the actual comic.
But Sure, I'll change it a bit more next time.
@TheSpriterZ: You need to work on these more Theyre very poorly made.
I would recommend you recheck your script.
@migasand: Thank you!
Well, it looks like Giovanni doesn't like Dan's idea of helping people around the world.

Will Dan be able to leave before Giovanni gets rid of him?
All your comments are extremely appreciated!

Also, I want Dan to have an extra Pokemon, Preferably Water type. Who do you think it should be? Try to think of less commonly used ones!

See you all Wednesday!
Good for everyone? Nah... Let's keep it to ourselves...

Loving it so far :)
*dramatic music play*