Old KDLA Pages

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This is where original versions of pages from Kirby's Dreamland Adventures are to be archived.

May contain spoilers for the actual comic, obviously.
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Old KDLA Pages

This is where original versions of pages from Kirby's Dreamland Adventures are to be archived.

May contain spoilers for the actual comic, obviously.

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Somebody hates Kracko.
Whatever you say table
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Look at that blocking in the first half of the page. Dedede and Kibble just crowded on the left, while the right side goes mostly unused. It's been fixed in the remake.

...Man, I can't believe it took so long to get this far in the remakings. I'll stop for now since the entirety of Green Greens is done, but I'll be back here after Castle Lololo's all remade and ready.
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Keeby sure was more assertive in this version. I didn't really get a handle on his personality until some years later. You see it more in the original 1-3, but Keeby at this point was being written as more of a big brother figure to Kirby, when presently he's meant as a younger brother. Big difference.
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Original title: Boss Fight! Vs Whispy Woods!

Unlike the last one, this page is actually pretty okay! A decent fight scene, I think.

Aside from that weird ending dialogue, I guess.
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Well, here we are. The dreaded AKK ripoff page. No, I didn't ask permission or anything! No, I'm pretty sure MK2716 had no knowledge of my comic! No, it doesn't make sense that my Kirby would be acting like that comic's Kirby! No, the table comment makes no sense here because in AKK it was a reference to earlier pages!

It's sh** like this that made me start doing the remakes in the first place.
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This doesn't even make enough sense Whispy was never a minion of Dedede even in this old continuity and I'm pretty sure he doesn't rule the forest either
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Original title: A Relative of a Relative of an Ally in Totally-Not-Hostile Territory... and Their Relatives

Seriously there were several better names I could've given him than Foppy
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The original obvious joke being "I didn't mean it literally". Again, a Kirby Origins reference.

...Does anyone reading this even remember Kirby Origins
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Remember when "oh fudge brownies" was an original joke? Because it definitely wasn't when I made this.
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It's kind of funny how I accidentally avoided the cliche of making this spot Kirby's home base well before I knew it was such a thing.

Also Boomer what the heckle is your dialogue.
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Oh boy, an Empty Space Inc gag. That's, like, the kind of joke I associate more with the old Cly's Super Comics than KDLA.

But obviously the reason I had to ditch this version was that weird cloud guy in the tenth panel. Totally ridiculous to have such a character in a Kirby comic.
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(Finally, speech bubbles. I don't have to doublepost any more pages probably.)

"Splat" was probably not the best choice of sound effect.
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...Oh yeah, the Stars were originally mentioned as being religious items. That's... probably still true? It's not a thing I've really figured out.
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Now, the first four pages of KDLA were made before I started using speech bubbles, so the text ended up being tricky to read against backgrounds. In late 2013 I edited them to at least have white outlining on the text, so they could be read. You can find the legible version of this page by clicking Next, and I'll have fuller commentary there.
Remade version is here. Also, feel free to hit Back for the truly original version of this page.

One weird change is that Batamon's eyes were originally farther apart. It's just... too off, looking at it now.
Remade version is here.

Now, the first four pages of KDLA were made before I started using speech bubbles, so the text ended up being tricky to read against backgrounds. In late 2013 I edited them to at least have white outlining on the text, so they could be read. You can find the legible version of this page by clicking Next, and I'll have fuller commentary there.
Remade version is here. Also, feel free to hit Back for the truly original version of this page.

Kirby shouldn't you be concerned about having just eaten someone
Remade version is here.

Now, the first four pages of KDLA were made before I started using speech bubbles, so the text ended up being tricky to read against backgrounds. In late 2013 I edited them to at least have white outlining on the text, so they could be read. You can find the legible version of this page by clicking Next, and I'll have fuller commentary there.
Remade version is here. Also, feel free to hit Back for the truly original version of this page.

Taking out the whole side series thing, there's still plenty wrong here. The unoriginal use of "can I steal your food", the fact that Elder Biv just happens to have the Sparkling Stars on him for unknown reasons... oh yeah, and Marx being way too Kirby-shaped. This was well before I made proper sprites for him.