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Pokemon Fan Comic:L.O.S.T

Pokemon Fan Comic:L.O.S.T

by Fire storm
Olreon used to be a young flareon who lived in a peacefully in the city, along with his mother , father and sister.But after his father going missing, and his mother murdered, he decided to move out from the city with his sister to live in the forest.He had enough of the city.

But then....

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Pokemon Fan Comic:L.O.S.T

Olreon used to be a young flareon who lived in a peacefully in the city, along with his mother , father and sister.But after his father going missing, and his mother murdered, he decided to move out from the city with his sister to live in the forest.He had enough of the city.

But then....

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MazXZ
March 30th, 2019
Hate to say it but it's probably dead. Tis said coming across comics that were discontinued with no explanation..
Umbreon (Guest)
January 23rd, 2018
It's like warrior cats
ShadowStalker1128
January 11th, 2018
is this dead or will it live???
Fire storm
January 7th, 2018
@Midnight-fox18: OH NO YOU FOUND OUT
Midnight-fox18
January 7th, 2018
I just read this comic and was looking at the cover and I realized
Lily
Olreon
S???
T???
The colors of the letters even correspond to the pokemon so I think you were intending that too >:3
That’s really clever! And based upon the description, it fits the comic too :3
Fire storm
September 26th, 2017
@HollyTheFluffyCat: You think so?
XDD
HollyTheFluffyCat
September 26th, 2017
This is amazing!
HollyTheFluffyCat
September 26th, 2017
Rest in spaghetti, never forgetti
HollyTheFluffyCat
September 26th, 2017
The anatomy in the 6th panel is amazing! And the expression in the last panel is great!

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HollyTheFluffyCat
September 26th, 2017
Woah holy crap this is awesome!
why do i exist
Fire storm
July 9th, 2017
@ShadowStalker1128: Oh yeah i just noticed that
@Fire storm: guests can't PM you :3

The only issue I see with the liepard itself is that it's muzzle is too long and narrow. I used to do this too, but a leopard's muzzle is shorter :3
Fire storm
July 8th, 2017
@SilverSail:

Thanks , I'll try to improve.

-I know my anatomy sucks and i'm trying to improve it by looking at actual animals.

-I did look at a liepard before drawing it out ( did i draw it wrongly or something? ).

-Can't draw trees.LOL.Yeah,I am trying to like draw a proper one.It's like my goal or something.

-Wait.So i'm suppose to use the same background each page?
Criticism

- Not to be rude but your anatomy needs a lot of reworking. Try finding out how a tree / Liepard looks like first before drawing it out.

- Your shading is okay but they are everywhere at the moment. For example the belly area should have shade because the light wouldn't be able to reach there.

The sun is not a spotlight. It does not shine at one particular row and leave the others in the dark. Thats not how sun works.

- When doing dialogue don't add tiny hashtags or words that do not relate to the plot at all as it makes the page messy. Try to stick with an identical background for each page.

- Add more expression! All 3 panels have the Liepard smiling and it looks very copy and pasted or very unnatarul and fake.
WildfireK
July 8th, 2017
@ShadowStalker1128:
Like when I get back from vacation?

Yes, I will, but I'll a few days to rework the plot
@WildfireK: ugh ikr

Hey that reminds me; in the end, are you going to reboot SaS?
Fire storm
July 7th, 2017
@ShadowStalker1128: AHH THANK YOU
WildfireK
July 7th, 2017
@ShadowStalker1128:
Okay dokie!

Yus it's hard to fit multiple protags on a cover and have it be simple like Firestorm's masterpiece
Bleh
@WildfireK: I know. But it isn't really my current style. Also, some thing son it bother me. It seems like Tess is the only main character, whilst Volt is just as important. It also looks like Tess Eevee and Tess Umbreon are two different characters. Im keeping the overall format of the cover, but I'm changing those things