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The Red Day

The Red Day

by Karubario
The Red Day is a fantasy story, going on in a not so distant future when, after a devastating event that became known as the Red Day, things started to change, with some people attaining special abilities: the Modified.
Because of these changes, fear started to grow, with normal people shunning the modified and sympathetics to a remote island, under the care of the military.
Taken by a desire of freedom, a group on the island decide to try and escape it, having to face the world and even their own selves to be able to get away.
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The Red Day

The Red Day is a fantasy story, going on in a not so distant future when, after a devastating event that became known as the Red Day, things started to change, with some people attaining special abilities: the Modified.
Because of these changes, fear started to grow, with normal people shunning the modified and sympathetics to a remote island, under the care of the military.
Taken by a desire of freedom, a group on the island decide to try and escape it, having to face the world and even their own selves to be able to get away.

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Karubario
August 27th, 2017
Hello, sorry for the late response. And you're right about The Dawn, they are not a organized group even though they exist for years they don't have even a place to call home or return to.

It might sound convenient what I am going to say but Edward, never saw a soulless in front of him he only heard stories about them and I am going to tell more of Edward, his exact place in The Dawn and the soulless in the final pages of this chapter. Thats why I said it would sound convenient.

About the disconnect part: you might be right I'will start paying more atention to that and try to make the dialogues fell more organic, I might actually be owing on that.

And thanks for your comment it helps a lot, and I do also like a lot your comics didn't read all yet but they are really what I like to read, I love urban legends and stories based on them.
Sorry again for the delay on answering you and for any english mistakes I might have committed here, I am still learning the language.
There is something I don't get...
for a militia like organization, the dawn sure ain't much... organized...

If Edward is one of the founders of the Dawn and hunts the monsters for the get-go why he's not sure how to prevent bodies from turning and bases his and other's safety on a rumours? As a military-man and veteran with years of experience, wouldn't his: "you know the drill" would be enough info for the rest of the crew to take action?

Why people seems surprised by Edward's bouts of anger? One would think that if you're with someone for quite some time you learn the person's quirks. So why people just straight up ignoring the new guy, instead of informing him when it's all right to approach the leader.

Don't get me wrong, I enjoy your comics, but the dialogues and some panels feel rather disconnected. It feels like an info dump to me rather than organic exchange between people.
Karubario
July 11th, 2017
@papierowybandyta: Edward would had acted almost the same way, but you're right about most of the others members of the group. Cody is actually a boy, even though it really doesn't look like.'
I bet that if Cody escaped from the whole ordeal unscathed, she would get seriously reprimanded for her incompetence.
Karubario
June 17th, 2017
Apologys for the delay
I was planing on doing a 2 weeks break because the animation course I was making ended. But after the break my computer broke and with it, the drawings I was making. But I am back now with another computer and if nothing goes wrong again I will start posting more frequently, one maybe two post for week. I am sorry again for the hiatus.
Karubario
April 22nd, 2017
this page took me more time to finish than I thought it would take. I wasn't happy with the choice of colours in the last pages so I'm trying to do some changes.
Karubario
March 27th, 2017
This is the Journal. At the end of every chapter more pages of it will be revealed. I created it in order to help the better understanding of the story as a whole.
@mckee11223: You'll find out... or not ;)
No! Is he going to become one of them?
@Karubario: Another thing I forgot to mention is that the art style reminds me of this game called "Valiant Hearts." It's beautiful. Really.
@mckee11223: Oh thank you man, that means a lot to me. Really. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Wow! Your comic is so new, but it has such a cool story and art style! I have no doubts that this will become one of the best comics on this site!
Peace out! Your new loyal supporter, ~mckee11223 @abnormalgeometry.smackjeeves.com
Thanks for checking
Hello, I'm Murilo and I'm new to the webcomic scene. This is my first project so I hope you bear that in mind while reading.
Thanks once again for checking out my comic.
I'd like to thank a close friend of mine for helping me with the translation, so... thank you.