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The Hawktalon, Comic Saga: The Unforgiven

One born with two wings
Another born with none
And a third born with only one

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Holy potatoes.
Wowza, yikes. I hope Ravenpaw and mockingbirdpaw can find a subway station close by, ya know, check into a hotel for a week and hope it blows over.

Man I’m awful for trying to make a joke about this XD
Emotion I guess
If Skyfall wasn't so emotional this would be my lockscreen

You're forgiven...
...Welp.
This one turned out a tragedy.
I mean, there's the fact that you're dead and possessing an apprentice. There's that teensy weensy hitch in your plan. Also, y'know, the whole 'murder her sister' thing.
There's a recurring theme in this series which I like, about forgiving, and not holding on to the past. Yinsoul forgave Yangspirit for killing Stonepaw, but nobody ever forgave Stonepaw... When 'unforgiven' and 'revenge' and 'someone you can't have' was mentioned, I started suspecting it was Stonepaw.
I'm kind of disappointed he's consumed by anger and revenge now, because I really loved his friendship with Yinsoul in Yin and Yang. But considering his death over a misunderstanding in an Oedipus-esque turn of events, I can understand why he'd be angry, particularly if he felt Yinsoul had moved on from his death too quickly. Might feel as though you've been forgotten.
References?
I think that Percy is like Percy Jackson, which I thought was cool. And great art!
Hawktalon,
January 22nd, 2019
Thank you so much for your comment! Nothing makes me happier than hearing from a fan!
I’m sure you weren’t expecting such a jovial answer, but I can’t help but to respond!
The Unforgiven was actually drawn and written before Skyfall, the first book- Skyfall is a prequel, so all the Kingdom areas were shown for the first time here! It’s always very interesting to show new areas in a medium that is solely visual! Also, sometimes things happen in a story that don’t directly move the plot along, maybe they sometimes just add character development!
Thank you so much for your kind words about my character- I’m glad you took time out of your day to get your opinion out there! At this point in the story, Mockingbirdpaw was actually told that the cure for her mom would take some time to prepare, so she was invited cordially to take a tour of the Kingdom while she waited! It was also, of course instrumental in shaping her later dedication to return to live in the Kingdom in the following comic, Kingdom Come!
I hope I was able to clear some things up!
Guest
January 22nd, 2019
Yeah your mom in danger so like get a tour of the kingdom instead of helping her. Little shit.



Also i don't see why this is nessisary to the story because everything was basically already explained in the first book so yeah this is just aggravating
Cries
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Holy moly, that was a plot twist, AND WHY DID YOU KILL OFF YOUR TWO MOST AMAZING CHARACTERS! Btw, the arts really good
Bluemj61
November 29th, 2018
Reference
"You gotta believe!!"
Oh god. Poor Yinsoul and Yangspirt :C
Why is this art different from the 1st comic? I'm just saying. It's really good though. Never stop doing what you love.
ohhhhhh
snap
Pastel_Dawn
November 14th, 2018
GASPSPPSPSP
WOT WOW HOW LONG HAVE YOU BEEN MAKING COMICS? I THINK I READ ALL OF THEM???? YOU HAVE SUCH GOOD IDEAS! I ALSO LOVE YOU ART STYLE! YOU ARE SUCH A GOOD ARTIST, TEACH ME YOUR WAYS!!