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Children of Eldair

Children of Eldair

by JemmaMYoung
A sorcerer saves a girl from flesh-eating demons. After trying to use magic to find her friends, he’s trapped in a vision of the past--one that will help him save the world and the girl he loves.
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Children of Eldair

A sorcerer saves a girl from flesh-eating demons. After trying to use magic to find her friends, he’s trapped in a vision of the past--one that will help him save the world and the girl he loves.

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Beautiful!
hyyyyyyype
well... wish granted?
good fox knows who the bad guys are >:(
Heeyy bad fox don't bite him... you don't know where he's been
well... seems to be getting serious
It's not gibberish though, gibberish would have no meaning towards it, what those kids spoke had meaning.
Love it!
just tell her she's got a talented tongue.
Dat face. Hilarious. :DD
heh, this page looks familiar
daww little pouch for the pooch.
Wait was he just stuck into the vision?
dracone
December 23rd, 2017
I like how the lights have a festive look to them, amusingly in the spirit of the Winter holiday season, and look bright and cheery while dim and distant. Not a whole lot of people pay attention to how light can be used to show the state of mind for the characters. To me, it looks like Iva feels what hope she would normally have about the situation is distant, her comment to Fox also highlights her feeling confined.
SincPlays
December 22nd, 2017
That fix is just so freaking cute. Calling it now, it's going to bite.
dracone
December 21st, 2017
Embera saw it, but the other girls are going to be in denial of it, all signs of their presences in the world before coming to this new world were erased. Whatever life Iva's mother would have had if she had not been born is what replaced the life she had with Iva.

To be fair, I would probably be in denial too if all signs of my existence were purged from the world around me. Our lives are made up of choices, consequences, those we interact with, those we influence directly, those we influence indirectly, events we choose to bring forth on our own, events forced upon us, messes we leave others, messes we leave ourselves, problems, solutions, and host of things so long that naming them all would be next impossible while also being so long they would drive the ones writing the list and the ones reading it to the brink of insanity.
Amarok
December 19th, 2017
No good deed goes unpunished.
Ralend
December 17th, 2017
lol did she smack a plague on them?
WiispNightmare
December 17th, 2017
Yes
Avenge it
Channel my wrath at such abuse >:U
Alse
December 15th, 2017
Best answer ever. :D