PMD - The Outsider

PMD - The Outsider

by BooglyMeowth
Some random pokemon is found in the sea inconscious.
May content some strong language and blood.
The comic can have grammar mistake because i'm french so it's difficult sometimes, you can correct me when i'm wrong.
I'm bad at making summary.
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PMD - The Outsider

Some random pokemon is found in the sea inconscious.
May content some strong language and blood.
The comic can have grammar mistake because i'm french so it's difficult sometimes, you can correct me when i'm wrong.
I'm bad at making summary.

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If you don't understand my way of writing, here the script :
"She's a hero ! She saved you !"
"No i'm not ! And since when you're here ?"
"Wait...Saved me ? What happened ?"
"You don't remember ? I found you in the sea. I don't know how you got there.... I thought you could tell us."
"Well...I can't remember anything...Sorry"
"Your head must have hit something, I'm sorry to heard that."
"Wait, he got amnesia ? Like in the books !"
"Boogly ! Wrong timing !"
"Hey I'm a girl"
Hope you like it ! I have new pen and stuff but I got bored for the background eh

If you don't understand my way of writing, here the script :
"I can't remember anything...It's like my mind is empty..."
"Nothing... Not even my name or something important..."
"My whole body is hurting... What happened before I woke up ?"
"You have visitors !"
"Hm...Hi ?"
"My name is Phony and I..."
Phony say that she was going to have an heart attack because of the stress of talking in front of everyone but then she say that she's also happy to know that the pokemon is okay.

If you don't understand my way of writing, here the script :
"Uuuuh..."
"I have a good new ! The Pokemon woke up !"
"OMG He woke up. So cool !"
"I don't see what is so exciting about that"
"*gone*"
"OH COME ON"
"Oh thanks god I was going to have an heart attack"
"I'm also glad he woke up uh..."
Phony is litterally me when I have to speak in front of everyone.
Like in the others page you can still give me some advice ^^

If you don't understand my way of writing, here the script :
"Lady and gentlemen. As the Mayor of WindCoast I have the honor to introduce you the hero of the day..."
"PHONY"
"Wait what ?! I'm not a hero !"
"C'mon don't be shy"
"But i'm shy..."
"Don't worry everything will be fine."
"*stare*"
"Oh my god what the... What am I supposed to say ?! AAAAH OMG OMG OMG EVERYONE LOOK AT ME I'M DEAD AAAAH"
@ShadowStalker1128: Thank you ! I'm glad you like it :D
@WildfireK: I found a pen in my room because the other were dying but in a few day I will get some new stuff like a say yesterday but thanks ! :D Yeah I know the legs are weird I fucked up because I was really tired it's was the night in my country so I didn't pay attention to what I was doing I tried to fix it but that look worst xD
And thanks ! :D
I love your art style! This looks good!
@BooglyMeowth:
It looks like you got a pen or sharpie or something to outline the characters - that's freat, because it makes them stand out a whole lot more!
I actually like the second page more than the first one - the paneling's easier to understand and everything's much more smoother
Though Boogly in panel 5 - his legs are a bit... off. I don't know, even though they're anatomically correct
Anyway, good page :3
Here the second page ! Hope you like it ! You can still give me some advice and other stuff i'm here to improve.
For the little information : Huss and Boogly are in a complicated relationship, Huss don't really like him but Boogly try to be friendly toward Huss. That's why Adèle say that's a weird situation.

If you don't understand my way of writing, here the script :
"What a beautiful new day !"
"Hey Adèle !"
"What's going on here ?"
"You don't know ? They found someone in the sea last night."
"*cough cough*"
"Hi Boogly"
"Oh hi Huss..."
"This is weird"
@WildfireK: Yeah google translate is the worst for translate thing :,) I think I understood now thanks ! Yeah the second page is almost done I just need to color it. So I have one of a buffer there just the second page but i'm gonna do the third page soon.
@BooglyMeowth:
STAMP!? That's so hilariously wrong
Well unless there's a definition I don't know about
A "buffer" is an art term.
It's when you make pages ahead of time, before you post them, so in case something happens (like you can't make a page for some reason)
You can keep posting comics because you have extra pages.
Do you kind of get what I mean?
It's like a backup
I can tell you have a buffer because the second page is already complete
"Buffer" in normal vernacular means a deterrent or something that prevents harm - like a safety net
@WildfireK: Sorry I didn't understand because I don't know what "buffer" mean °^° ( because google translate say "stamp" so that's not really helping me to understand)
@BooglyMeowth:
Okay dokie
How much of a buffer do you have?

Thanks by the way
@WildfireK: I'm gonna read your comic because i'm curious and I love to see the comics of the others people xD
Thanks ! The next update will be tomorrow I think because I already made the second page (but it's messy and they're too much panel on it x-x The second page is a disaster :,) )
@BooglyMeowth:

It's alright - it doesn't trip me up, so I'm fine with it -

And I faved your comic - but it's a quid pro quo. I favorite your comic, you favorite mine.

Just kidding XD don't fave it it's awful XP
Hope to see more from you!
@WildfireK: Thanks ! Yeah I know something it's hard to read some part I will try to fix that ! I will change my pen ad pencils soon so maybe that will be better. Some people already told me that the panel orders were difficult to understand I will try to fix that too ^^
And thanks ! Sorry for my english, if I made mistake you can correct me because i'm french so sometimes the things I say are wrong but i'm trying to be understandable.
I say the panel design, the lineart and the shading are spectacular.
The characters seem to be colored more neatly than the backgrounds, though. It could just be me.
It was kinda hard to read the part where the bewott's talking about the unconscious person -
but the rest was fine
I like the front view with the eevee, but the eyes seem a little far apart on the Dewott's front view.
It was a little hard to figure out which way to go - perhaps panel padding (space in between comic panels) might clear it up.
Nice job! Expressions are spot on!
First page of my first comic ! I'm a beginner so if you have any advice to help me I won't say no ! Also i'm french so my english isn't perfect, sorry if I made mistake, you can correct me.

If you don't understand my way of writing, here the script :
"I need help !"
"Is someone awake ?! Please I need help !"
"Who the fuck is yelling in the middle of the night ?!"
"The fuck..."
"It's me. Please I really need some help Larry !"
"I saw someone in the water..."
"He was inconscious so I brought him back on the shore. He's not alright I need a doctor, please help me !"