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A Hero's Tale

A Hero's Tale

by Legacycreator97
When a young boy's village is attacked, and his father vanishes soon after, Argo Legend sets out on a journey to find his father and learn the truth about why his village was attacked, but as Argo continues to dig into his father's past, he quickly realizes that some secrets shouldn't be brought to light, and that finding the answers to these secrets could lead to dire consequences.
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A Hero's Tale

When a young boy's village is attacked, and his father vanishes soon after, Argo Legend sets out on a journey to find his father and learn the truth about why his village was attacked, but as Argo continues to dig into his father's past, he quickly realizes that some secrets shouldn't be brought to light, and that finding the answers to these secrets could lead to dire consequences.

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@Guest: Thanks!!
Guest
September 6th, 2019
I jus wanna say amazing
@Trenchcoat: Wooooooooooooow lol
@Trenchcoat: Thanks man, and Yeah, she tends to be over reactive, but yes, she matures as the story goes on
@Trenchcoat: Hopefully, the idea I'm going for, it'll show that Faega has layers to him
@Trenchcoat: Thanks man, I thought it would be a cool way to make the different countries feel different you know
@Trenchcoat: You know it!!
Doctor Wily?!?! Jkjk
Mei likes to overreact... I personally find it annoying so I hope she outgrows it. That said I've enjoyed the story thus far. Your action panels are well done.
A simple character goal for a seemingly simple character. Can't wait to see how you flesh him out.
Love the basic info for each continent. Here's a helpful video for fleshing them out: https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=isdaYjET9cg
Didn't really need feaga reiterating that the fight was fun. Had you left off at him saying argo really didn't need help the effect would have been the same. Have a character repeat info if its A. Important and must be remembered, B.Your doing some sort of gag or joke (like if someone was to poke fun at feaga's love of fighting, or c. You have a character that's unsure of something and is double checking. Now there are other scenarios that I didn't think of, my point is when your going to state anything more than once think of A. Do you need to and B. Does it make sense to do so. In the end it comes down to your own judgement.
I find it super cool that you have a race with specific traits that aren't typical normally. Its a fantasy world so of course you have a race with normally not natural hair color as their thing.
Honestly it didn't look like Argo was toying around that much. Had you more moments where he could have ended the fight but didn't or used unnecessary moves that would of been the case. To me it just looks like Mei being a dick. I could have missed something though *shrug*.
@Guest: Lol, maybe
Trouble again
Sorry for the wait, but more is coming
AND HE'S OUTTA HEEEERRREEEEEE!!!!
@Guest: Well said!!