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Flaw

Flaw

by Miss-Sheepy
A story following Flaw the demonling, a girl working on fixing a mistake. Also there's magic!

Updates Wednesdays and Fridays!
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Flaw

A story following Flaw the demonling, a girl working on fixing a mistake. Also there's magic!

Updates Wednesdays and Fridays!

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"He's called Bluetooth because he uses a Bluetooth."
Guest
August 8th, 2018
i love this comic :)
Kitty cat, you're gonna get a bruised backside.
@Meta-Akira: EEEEEE I'm glad to see you noticed! That is a big part of her character and I worried I wasn't showing that well enough. Thank you so much ;v;
I noticed this throughout this comic, but I really like the detail that Flaw struggles with saying "this one" instead of "I" or "me". Speculation tells me this is from her "training" as a slave to take away her individuality by making her refer to herself as something that could be seen as an object instead of a person.

And then her coming to a sudden halt when shouted at also feels like echoes of her days of slavery.

It really adds a lot to the storytelling without being exposition. Good use of show don't tell.