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Planet Eevees

Planet Eevees

by PastelWhile
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Meet Pluto, a little eevee and his other eeveelution friends. He’s stayed an outcast all his life due to being too strange. One day he is greeted with kindness and he may decide to pass that kindness on.

Split into two books:
Book one-Hopeful
Book two-Hopeless

Warnings-LGBT+ Characters, gore, sexual reference

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58
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2 Months Ago
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Planet Eevees

=============================================CANCELLED!=================================================

Meet Pluto, a little eevee and his other eeveelution friends. He’s stayed an outcast all his life due to being too strange. One day he is greeted with kindness and he may decide to pass that kindness on.

Split into two books:
Book one-Hopeful
Book two-Hopeless

Warnings-LGBT+ Characters, gore, sexual reference

Recent Comments

PastelWhile
August 29th, 2019
@PastelWhile: This says Saturn was a drama queen, but that was before I changed it to a more violent plot. Saturn was NOT being dramatic
adios quq
Talk about a Cliff hanger that will never be solved...
Guest
August 2nd, 2019
Hureeeeeeeeee
Plutos face
goobye -w-
Oof. Goodbye, Planet Eevees.
adios
Oh well. Adios, this comic
Sooo, I’m canceling this comic. Don’t worry! Nothing happened and I’m not going anywhere (unless I change platforms, but I don’t think I will).

Canceling this comic is a choice I’ve decided, and here’s why.

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1. The plot’s really bad

The plot doesn’t seem too bad right now. It’s just a few characters who seem to have a few secrets about each other and problems arise from that.

Well you see, that’s not even the main plot. The second book is the actual main plot, it’s left in shadows for a very long time, and it’s not even very good. Things don’t make too much sense, and it doesn’t connect well at all with the first book. I’m not even sure I could really fix the plot, since the ripped book which is part of the main plot has already been introduced since page 6.
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2. Bad characters

Oh boi, every character is pretty bad, especially Pluto. They don’t feel as if they have really personalities, or they’re wrong in some way.

Uranus was not even suppose to be crazy. He was a suppose to be a stupid, mischievous, maybe a little violent, but not straight up insane.

Saturn’s actual personality is gross and weird. His normal personality is weird enough that I barely actually show it.

Other characters are underdeveloped. Neptune could have been an interesting characters, but I barely wrote anything about her, and because of that her arc was short and boring.

The characters weren’t really planned out well and their personalities changed depending on what the plot wanted. I needed a reason for Saturn to hate Uranus, so boom he’s crazy now and ripped Saturn’s ribbons off.
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3. Trying something new

This one isn’t really a main reason for cancelling this comic, but I thought I’d talk about it anyways.

My characters are all pokemon. There’s nothing wrong with having your story be Pokemon based. There’s lot of interesting stories that have Pokemon with them.

I just think that perhaps creating new stories from scratch would be good practise. I could create my own species and my own world (even though I’m not really sure Planet Eevees was even in a normal Pokemon world) . I think I’d be good practise if I want to continue writing stories and creating art.

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Anyways, that’s all! In short, it’s mainly because my plot and characters are pretty bad, and I’d like to start something new! I’m not really sure what the next thing I’d try would be, but I’d make sure to tell everyone!

Oh, and the comic isn’t going anywhere. The comic pages are still accessible. I did delete the tumblr blog as it didn’t have much anyways. As for the discord, I’m not really sure what to do with it yet. Perhaps I could just make it my discord for people to chat on?

I hope this was understandable. The comic was really good practise in making plots and character, developing my art and staying on a schedule! It’s the first ever comic of mine to actually make it to one year, and I don’t regret doing it!

I’m really thankful that all of you read the comic! Thank you so much! I hope that you’ll continue looking at whatever new things I create!

(Was that too cheesy?)

And till next time, adios!
BudgieGryphon
July 27th, 2019
The muzzles are a liiitle bit overdefined, but the whiskers are a neat touch. On the second panel, Uranus’s muzzle looks great due to the angle his face is at. Maybe tone down on the outlining of the sides of the muzzle, depending of what facial angle is being shown?
silver moon :3
July 27th, 2019
There mouths kinda look like rabbit mouths Xd no offense
Flareon1225
July 27th, 2019
@Thedoggoking: Or maybe it is who knows
Thedoggoking
July 27th, 2019
No it is not enough
Sylveeon
July 26th, 2019
Nice
A new style. I like it.
PastelWhile
July 26th, 2019
Oh boi
I am a peace child well kinda...
Anyways I think that Saturn should at least listen to Uranus...
XD I can’t do it every time I read his name I start giggling
AMKHeart
July 23rd, 2019
SAY IT! du dududududuudud du du!
Guest
July 20th, 2019
@silver moon :3: It actually says skit short for surskit instead of skit for that bad word.
Sylveeon
July 20th, 2019
@Flareon1225: I agree. I mean, I feel bad for both Uranus and Saturn, but I just think that everyone should give Uranus a chance. It’s hard to forgive someone who’s done something to hurt you, but people can change.
Flareon1225
July 20th, 2019
Well, that's quite hard to decide. Uranus ripped his ribbons, but not listening to someone trying to apologize ain't that polite either. I guess I support Uranus, for he's actually trying to apoligize