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Book One: Water Chapter: Thirteen.Five: The Mountain

While traveling through the Earth Kingdom, the gang take a break on a mountain where they meet a strange girl. Meanwhile, Zuko is still trying to track down the Avatar.


* set between season 1 episode 13 and 14, after The Blue Spirit

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SALTORII
Yesterday
Aw ty! I hope to find a way to get more dynamic angles in, there’s a lot of build up so far I, going to double the action pages, I hope, so I can add more interesting pages! I’m glad she’s serving as plot driver & comic relief haha
Hehe! Nia's drama never gets old. ;9 (On a side note, I love the effect on page 2, there's such drama with the extreme angle, and the shading on Nia. I also really like the way the back of Katara's head was drawn here.)

Nice job! Can't wait for more! :3
Auro-Zorro
September 17th, 2018
Ah well then that sounds just as good, I'm interested to see how your fight scenes act out and how they look. Great job on your comic so far!
SALTORII
September 17th, 2018
Ah! Tysm! I dont know how soon there will be big air bending sections but there is a battle scene planned. Really happy it looks good it took longer than usual haha!
Auro-Zorro
September 17th, 2018
omg what even is that last panel, it's so freakin' gorgeous. I hope we see more air bending because I absolutely love those swirls
SALTORII
September 15th, 2018
*footnote* I worry about this sort of thing being a bit Mary sueish, but considering how canon goes I really wanted to hint and katara’s own budding feelings, like fire shadowing in the earlier story. Since that’s a common critique of their relationship. And sokka was always wise to this crap in book 1 haha. No ship hate or centric, just trying to stick to and add onto canon. I love all ships haha
SALTORII
September 15th, 2018
Yes I’m trying to ‘issue’ it so I can pace myself. I e done a few pages in advance but I also need to edit it and figure out pacing, extra pages might be added too etc
Rocket Axxonu
September 15th, 2018
Hehe! So curious to see what happens next. (To be continued, does that mean this is the end of the chapter?)

Saw your update about school, so sad, but I suppose it's a necessary part of life. (One page a day would still be a pretty lightning fast speed, though, considering how long it takes to do a page of comic.)

Can't wait for the next one!
Rocket Axxonu
September 13th, 2018
@SALTORII: Wow, I didn't realize it was that strict. (Was that because you had the first page of the comic as the cover? Because it seems like when I search, there's a lot of comics that don't have covers at all...) Personally, I think that would work better to have a page of comic as the cover than having no cover at all, but I guess if it's a rule, there's no getting around it. (I should probably go see if I can find the rules for the site, lol, I didn't remember seeing that.)
SALTORII
September 13th, 2018
Ah tysm! Your continued support warms my cold, dead heart. 💓 I was really hesitant to add a cover but I got a pm saying it’d be taken down if I didn’t haha. I love covers but I just couldn’t think of anything suitable cus a lot of it is talking so far D:
Rocket Axxonu
September 13th, 2018
Ha!!! My oh my, what a reaction. (I love the ghostly effect on page 18, it totally had 'The Scream' vibe. XDDD!!!) Also loved your new cover (weirdly, I saw it on dA first, lol), I really wish more comics (especially ATLA) on this site would include covers with their work, it's just so nice when you're doing random searches to be able to see the artwork right there with the title.

Love your work so far, keep it up! Can't wait for the next pages! :3
SALTORII
September 13th, 2018
A little profile up for the interlude. Because the next part has more action and I will be going back to school as it starts, I’m going to skip 1 day to give extra time. Sorry for filler/stalling haha
Rocket Axxonu
September 11th, 2018
@SALTORII: Lol, yeah, right after you do something (art, writing, etc.) it's so hard to tell objectively how it's working until quite a bit of time has passed. But yeah, I love this so far, it's hilarious. (Oh gosh, page 7 where the girl's text is so small you can't really see it, and Sokka's face--so great, I laughed so much.) I would love to have funny gag stuff like this in my own comics (since I'm always imagining little gag-strip type things in my mind, lol), but they hardly ever seem to turn out, so I know how hard this stuff is to pull off.

Haha, thanks! I've been excited about it since it's the longest comic I've ever done before, and I think my art has improved by doing so many pages.
SALTORII
September 11th, 2018
Aw thank you so much man! I’m really glad I’m nit alone in finding this stuff funny haha, those things are hard the gauge. It means a lot, your comic looks so good but I’ve only had time to skim a few of the recent pages 😩 the art is so so good!
Rocket Axxonu
September 10th, 2018
Ha!! Wow, this is so much fun, I love the detail in the art and the humor is captured so well. (Oh gosh, I love Katara and Sokka's expressions in panel 1, the blue in their faces was the perfect touch.)

It's just great seeing a new Avatar comic! Can't wait for more!!
SALTORII
September 9th, 2018
I think around now I’m getting more of a hang of things and I think I can say my arts less rushed and better on the following pages. More on model. It’s all a learning process of managing time v quality haha!
SALTORII
September 7th, 2018
Up!
I will be trying to upload 2 pages a day on average until issue 1 is done and I need to ink the next 20 pages, etc. Thanks all for the interest as of late!
Morzone
September 6th, 2018
Classic Sokka. This is going to be great!
SALTORII
September 6th, 2018
Oops
Sorry about the out of order uploads yesterday. I should have triple checked haha, thanks for pointing it out to me.