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Witches' Brew

Witches' Brew

by Soturisi
Lucius works as shopkeeper on a magic supplies store living a quiet life. But he has a really dark secret past behind him, easy to keep hide until he finds a demonic stone and decides to summon it.
Slice of life with a twist.

⚠️*Warning* Mature content! ⚠️
Rated+18 for lenguage, blood, nudity and sexual content (BoyxBoy)
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Witches' Brew

Lucius works as shopkeeper on a magic supplies store living a quiet life. But he has a really dark secret past behind him, easy to keep hide until he finds a demonic stone and decides to summon it.
Slice of life with a twist.

⚠️*Warning* Mature content! ⚠️
Rated+18 for lenguage, blood, nudity and sexual content (BoyxBoy)

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@Dilly: thank youu!!
@WindowMaker: oh my! yep this one is the lastest, i don't know wht appears before 6 T_T

Edit: FIXED
Then he just slammed a "Summoning Artifact" box on his desk? Hope it wasn't labeled as "Fragile"...

P.S. Isn't this page supposed to be placed after page 6, rather than before it?
Dilly
July 15th, 2019
he's REALLY CUTE ON THIS PAGE... I LOVE HOW YOU DREW HIM
Kalliko
July 11th, 2019
I love the fact that he's not bothered at all XD
Possible recommendations for dialogue changes, although it appears they may be out of order. The first bubble seems to be replying to something, but the last bubble on the previous page was "Surprise me." and this one is positioned before she mentions her friend or the artifact.


1st bubble - "Fine, but I don't want to take stock of the warehouse again." OR "Fine, since I don't want to take stock of the warehouse again."

3rd bubble: - "She sent me an artifact to try to inspect and activate, since she wasn't able to."

4th bubble - replace "won't be" with "isn't".
Soturisi
June 24th, 2019
@The Orange Cow: éwé
Soturisi
June 24th, 2019
@Guest: éwé
Soturisi
June 24th, 2019
@The Orange Cow: oh, thank you so much! <3

yeah, sounds much better than mine, thank you! <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3
As far as wording goes, this might be a slightly better way to phrase things(please feel free to disregard this, I'm just guessing what you might be going for):

PREVIOUS PAGE(01-03)

last speech bubble: "Did something happen, Lucius(or 'honey', or both)?"

THIS PAGE

1st speech bubble - remove the word 'in'

2nd speech bubble - use 'got' instead of 'get' OR "Basically, I'm bored."

3rd speech bubble - "Could I have the rest of the day off? Because I don't think anyone will visit the shop until tomorrow."

3.5 speech bubble - "And I don't want to fall asleep on the desk, it looks awful."
Soturisi
July 8th, 2019
I think I put to much blue in this page, but happi ly no more candles for me!

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Soturisi
July 15th, 2019
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Guest
June 17th, 2019
Tentacles
Soturisi
June 30th, 2019
This page was a pain, not for difficult or complex or blah blah, just because I do the pages with Procreate on a Ipad 2018 and with this canvas size I can only use 18 layers and well, too much layers for light effects x_DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD And because i need too much days for it because I was going to continue the page but the ipad was low battery or without battery because i forgot to charge it or i forgot to switch on the plug when conected the ipad for charging x_DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

Yeah, I'm idiot x_D
Boss has an open curtain policy.
@LostLupo: thank you so much!!! <3 <3
Coloring mASTER
@Soturisi: Dude, the highlighting and coloring on this alone is so dang GOOD. I love it so much. Excited for this new comic!
Soturisi
June 11th, 2019
@The Orange Cow: ehehehe
Try spicing things up by summoning an infernal being?