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Raptor

Raptor

by ElenPanter
This is a story about young dinosaur Raptor, who was banished from his tribe, because he was not like the others. And there his adventures begin. He would meet a lot of dangers, new friends, the reason why his tribe was isolated many years ago and had no contacts with other ones. He would find out the Truth.
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Raptor

This is a story about young dinosaur Raptor, who was banished from his tribe, because he was not like the others. And there his adventures begin. He would meet a lot of dangers, new friends, the reason why his tribe was isolated many years ago and had no contacts with other ones. He would find out the Truth.

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ElenPanter
July 17th, 2019
@Thedoggoking: because of the bones? XD
Thedoggoking
July 16th, 2019
I have a bad feeling about this 0.o
ElenPanter
July 14th, 2019
@Guest: O-O
Guest
July 14th, 2019
well that dino is gonna get eaten
ElenPanter
July 12th, 2019
@Hardychuckle: HEY HEy Hey hey xDDD
Hey
ElenPanter
July 12th, 2019
ElenPanter
July 12th, 2019
@PsychicNature: yeah, she just swallowed the "he" part xD
Okay!
ElenPanter
July 12th, 2019
@PsychicNature: lol xD
ElenPanter
July 12th, 2019
@PsychicNature: that's right :D
ElenPanter
July 12th, 2019
@PsychicNature: I just really need to review these old pages for grammar mistakes, the thing is that I have only png files unfortunately XD
But feel welcome to write about any mistakes :D
ElenPanter
July 12th, 2019
@PsychicNature: I can see them too xD I wrote it when I my English was bad. And thank you for advice! I really need such site :D
PsychicNature
July 11th, 2019
It's still adorable
PsychicNature
July 11th, 2019
It's official, my English teacher is rough
Do you mean "He's gone...."?
And instead of "till" (which is supposed to be spelled 'til), I would use "before"
PsychicNature
July 11th, 2019
Go Raptor!
PsychicNature
July 11th, 2019
I laughed at the frog, then immediately blinked in surprise
PsychicNature
July 11th, 2019
At least being green offers excellent camouflage
PsychicNature
July 11th, 2019
Guardian
Must... resist... spelling... error...
I feel so bad for correcting someone with such a brilliant art style and concept.
PsychicNature
July 11th, 2019
I feel like a grammar nerd
May I make a suggestion?
Instead of what is currently written, you change it too:
"I had to wait for my execution in Kretre near the foot of the mountain where we lived."
or "I waited for my execution in Kretre near the foot of the mountain where we lived."
PsychicNature
July 11th, 2019
Gotta love grammar
I like this so far, but I noticed there were a few grammar mistakes in the paragraph.
I suggest running the script through a grammar editor, as Word really only checks spelling.
Grammarly, for instance, is free.
I did not see any spelling errors though!