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WOE: Wings Over Ethereal

WOE: Wings Over Ethereal

by Seven Rain
Dark events are beginning to unravel on planet Chrona! While tension and fear grips the beings of two distant kingdoms searching for peace, they remain blind to the unimaginable forces from beyond the stars that will change their lives forever.

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WOE: Wings Over Ethereal

Dark events are beginning to unravel on planet Chrona! While tension and fear grips the beings of two distant kingdoms searching for peace, they remain blind to the unimaginable forces from beyond the stars that will change their lives forever.

(Updates at 6PM Central Time on varying days!)

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If it makes you feel better, I think this page looks pretty great.
Aww...
Just when I was starting to like him.
@Aldraia: It actually is meant to say Ixis, but looking back on it I can see how it would be confusing. I think her concern is a bit of a relic of older versions of this scene, before lots of rewriting was done.

It's hard to explain, but originally there was more emphasis from Fathom on how "anything could happen" in the strange events and atmosphere, among other things.

Reina knows full well Ixal could harbor the intent to kill, but at one point Fathom's dialogue was meant to make Reina question whether Ixis could go too far in a fight.

I might have to revisit this page and see if there are better ways to phrase it, and don't feel bad about the nitpicking; I've been working on this comic for years, and a lot of stuff can get lost or messed up trying to manage so many pages and the occasional changes in writing, not to mention all the writing/changes that happen ahead of time and behind the scenes.

Not many readers comment on things, so it's nice having errors and stuff pointed out so I can try to fix things up and make it easier for new readers to avoid getting confused!

*EDIT*
I've made an alteration to her dialogue! I know Guest comments don't really have a way of being notified that they've been replied to, but I still want to say I appreciate you pointing that out. I didn't do the best job of reviewing this scene's dialogue before putting it into the comic, apparently. Haha.
I continue to nitpick.
"Y-you don't think Ixis would kill his brother, do you?"
Did you mean Ixis, or Ixal?
@Aldraia: Thanks again, I'll get to fixing that soon! (I'll have to make a real mental note of that one, I seem to mess it up a lot.)
More punctuation issues
Once again, "it's" should be the possessive form "its", not the contraction.
@Aldraia: Thanks for pointing that out, I'm always worried I'll miss little things like that when I have to change the name of something. I'll have to fix that ASAP.
@Aldraia: The narration was meant to be cryptically obtuse and silly here, sorry it put such a poor taste in your mouth.

Thanks for pointing out the improper use of "it's", I'll have to see if I can still go back and edit this one. The original file(s) for it might be gone.
Small name error...
Ah, is that why King Gerald says 'Hogosha' there... when changing the names, you missed one of the pages with the name Hogosha on it. Page 245, Passion 77.
So confused.
The narration on this page is *really* poorly phrased... also, you should have been using "its", which is the possessive form of "it"; "it's" is a contraction for "it is" or "it has".
TheJGamer
January 16th, 2018
Hmm, shady.
JoKeR
January 16th, 2018
Something really big is going on behind the curtain.

(^__-)
sentiashinou
January 9th, 2018
@Redjive: ;) Get a couple decades of practice under your belt and you'll have no problems surpassing me.
Seven Rain
January 9th, 2018
@Redjive: Yeah, the black shirts and grey pants are just standard casual wear around the castle, though I had a nasty habit of designing their uniforms with those same generic pants many years ago. (I'm debating with myself whether I should update Lowel and Kraz's uniforms and by how much. Dirsta's is very decidedly just weighted gear thrown over his casual clothes, though.)
Seven Rain
January 9th, 2018
@Redjive: Ha, I was wondering if anyone would point that out. It does seem like Ixis's condition kinda stole Reina's kidnapping thunder, but I couldn't find a decent way to work it into the pages without it feeling awkward amidst concern with Ixis's severe condition.

Try not to think of it as survivor's guilt, though. I'm not trying to downplay Reina's kidnapping, the primary reason for these past couple pages is to add a bit more meat and bones to the couples' relationship. I mean I don't want to try and make readers take a cutesy /ss/ romance TOO seriously, but I don't want it to feel like 100% shallow fanservice, either.

(And spoiler alert: Not everyone is more concerned with Ixis than Reina right now, and I think that'll have a bit more of an effect in contrast to others glossing over it anyway.)
Redjive
January 9th, 2018
These past few episodes have just been Survivors_Guilt.JPG
It's amazing how when you're the one who gets out unscathed, you always feel like it's you're fault that the ones who optionally risked injury and death to help you got hurt. You should've done something more to help them right?
Redjive
January 9th, 2018
@sentiashinou: You make my lack of drawing skill painfully obvious. *shot through the heart plays in the background*
Redjive
January 9th, 2018
Someone FINALLY notices. I mean, I guess the black shirts are in of themselves fairly distinctive, but still. At least now, for morale purposes, they should wear proper uniforms.
Seven Rain
January 8th, 2018
@TheJGamer: Sounds like an excuse they'd use themselves, haha.



@JoKeR: It's always fun getting a chance to have the Adamantians contrast the serious tone of the rest of the comic.
JoKeR
January 7th, 2018
Hahahaha ...good punchline.