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A Question of Trust

by Phoenix of Chaos
There was a time when Phoenix's life was simple, maybe carefree.
Then the Chaos arrived, and with it the end of that life...

This is a comic based on the Phoenix of Chaos character and his past.
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There was a time when Phoenix's life was simple, maybe carefree.
Then the Chaos arrived, and with it the end of that life...

This is a comic based on the Phoenix of Chaos character and his past.

Recent Comments

dundundunDUNNNNNNN
Oh no not that! Good by the way.
Djoing
February 6th, 2009
I am hereby acknowliging the existance of this comic.
Is Phoenix being litteral in that last panel?
Uh oh...
That comes later, but thanks for the comment.
Yamataro
January 27th, 2009
Nice start. May I suggest that you add a little more feeling into this though? You are going too fast to display any loss of family. Like crying, or even caring. Just take it slower...
I never said you couldn't... =P to you too!
I'd let you if;

A) I wasn't struggling to slot the people that are currently cameoing into the plot (got Lisa, Plokman and Team Disastix in securely, Martin almost secure)
B) I had your sprites.
Confirmed Cameo's;
Lisa
Plokman
Martin
Team Disastix
Derek and Dark
Lamoop
Kris

And here it is, the infamous Phoenix Talon.
Okay, guys, here's the long and short.
I'm writing the plot to this like I would a story, complete with gaps for the comics. If you really want to read ahead of the comic, hit my deviantArt account. You can reach that on my profile.
Can I cameo?
Yay I'm in!
Confirmed Cameo's;
Lisa
Plokman
Martin
Team Disastix
Derek and Dark
Lamoop
Kris
You're free to use LM's sprites here. =3
For those who can't read it...
Panel 1: We searched for the source of the explosion. It turned out...

Panel 2: It was my home. The one place I considered safe was the source of so much death.

Panel 3: The first thing I found was Mother's glasses. A sure sign she had fallen. But it wasn't until I found the next item...

Panel 4: My brother's visor. This sight made me determined. I would find whoever was responsible for this and bring them down.

Panel 5: Just like wishes, mistakes come in bunches of three. This anger was strike one; two more were to follow. Little did I realises the consequences of what seemed to be such a simple decision...

Credit to Apple for Phoenix' Sister sprites, Zather for the glasses, Whip for inspiring the pulsing vein of anger.
Confirmed Cameo's;
Lisa
Plokman
Martin
Team Disastix
Derek and Dark
Can the Disastix cameo?

Disastix = Jaw&Cloak
There an opening for everyone's favourite fox? :D
You have my sprites so can I cameo?
Can Derek n Dark cameo?