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Menkaure

by PJupiter
Allison, once a happy regular girl, is now having what appears to be a mental breakdown. But is there more to what she's seeing, and who is this "Menkaure"?...
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Allison, once a happy regular girl, is now having what appears to be a mental breakdown. But is there more to what she's seeing, and who is this "Menkaure"?...

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PJupiter
December 31st, 2007
thanks raziel!! yay! i hope to do some more egyptian themed comics in the future that would be nice!! i think egypt themes are sooo romantic! oh well! maybe once i get some of my other comics more completed or something!! XD
Raziel
December 29th, 2007
Nice...*sniffles*
I really liked it. u have such a nack for story lines. I just wished it was longer! *sniffles* I don't think she died necessarily...physically, perhaps. However, speaking spiritually - soul-ly??? (lol XDDD) she crossed over to a different parallel world - that which our physical eyes could not see....sumthing like it. LOL XDD DO MORE EGYPTIAN THEME STORY PLZ??????? *puppy eyes*
PJupiter
April 24th, 2007
yay thanks lashana! XD i tried!
Lashana
April 22nd, 2007
Oh, Shiney! XD
Lashana
April 22nd, 2007
I agree, bald heads ARE hard to draw. You did a good job though. :)
PJupiter
January 28th, 2007
yeah! although i feel sorry for the night janitor or whoever comes in next.. "help! there's a body lying here! uhh someone?!?! help??" ehehe oh well
PJupiter
September 20th, 2006
*gasp!*
PJupiter
September 10th, 2006
yayeee! thanks ferfer!!! ya i'm just gonna leave his bald ol' head just the way it is cuz well.. if i just HAVE to draw bald heads again i can look back and say "hah it's better than that last one!" or something like that .. -_- er.. anyway! .. yay!!! ya have dylan make a story that'd be great!! bwahahhaha! i wanted to teach a class for kent parks y'know this winter but i think maybe i'll do it in spring or something instead since i just started this new job so .. rar! anyway! yay! ~_~
jenR8art
September 9th, 2006
Maria, Dylan and I just read the story and we love it. Your drawing style just gets better and more refined, such talent!!! **beaming proudly** Maria loves the shading, Dylan wants me to help him illustrate his story tomorrow. I love Egypt and the idea of past lives and old souls fascinate me, so I really like how you left the ending open for us to use our own imaginations. I agree with Mon that their souls have finally reunited and can lay to rest. I still can't pronounce her name though... hehe! ;) Oh, and I like bald heads, I think you should keep it!
PJupiter
September 6th, 2006
ya it's annoying being a perfectionist while trying to draw! XD you should still make one though so i can read it! ~_~ anyway, yay thanks for the compliments though! and I wish mine were as nice as Yuu Watase's! gosh if i could go around drawing tamahome or tasuki everyday i'd be in heaven eheheh
Very nice art, I've tried to draw comics before, but I always want to add something and then think it looks bad, so I end up smudging the page. Darn perfectionist urges. XD

Anyway, very nicely done, the close-up of Alison reminds me a lot of that manga creator's art, Yuu Watase. ^.^
PJupiter
August 18th, 2006
omgosh i'm retarded, i was re-reading through this and i realized i completely forgot to upload page 11... HAHAHAH<-nervous laughter...
sorry!!! here it is .. errrr...
PJupiter
July 31st, 2006
in what way! how should i fix his poor bald head! help me moni!! heheh .. i wanted to actually show him without his nemes on, but then i kept redrawing and redrawing his head till i finally said that's it and kept that one.. sigh!
(and how dare you not post on every page! grr!! eheh my pages feel so lonely now without moni-dialogue!)
PJupiter
July 31st, 2006
hehe no probably not.. at first i was planning on a different story altogether that had allison actually going into the past to live out her life as Khamerernebty, but then the story would be really long, and I was trying to keep it as a short story so somehow it just worked out this way .. but maybe someday if I get things published then I can redo this into a longer story! *i hope i hope i hope*
glad y'like it though!! I think it's so eerie/mysterious that his sarcophagus hasn't been found!! I mean what if he never really CAN rest in peace!! poor menkaure! eheehe
Demonikaess
July 31st, 2006
awww thats so sad hes waiting for her in the underwold!!
Demonikaess
July 31st, 2006
she so died!... thats how i view it.. she finally found menkaure and her soul left her body and now she's finally with him.. sorry i didnt post on all of the pages but since its so short i didnt feel i had to. this is really good.. really breif but great.. you should try and submit it to a manga magazine or something!!! (thast how the artist of fruits basket started out) yeah its good..!! and the bald head is a bit weird.. (i draw baldies all the time for my deamons so . eheheheh).. but otherwise its GOOOOOOOOD GOOOOOD GOOOD
NOOOOOOO!
it's over... sniff
would you add more to the story if people send you ideas? just wondering.
i like the extra info.
PJupiter
July 31st, 2006
see.. it's a short story! oh well..
let me know what you think of it! like what REALLY happened to allison, and what exactly happened at the end! i really wanna know how people perceived it! yay! and be sure to check out my other comics
twisted fates (http://www.twisted.smackjeeves.com) and in pursuit of nain (http://www.nain.smackjeeves.com)!
thanks!
PJupiter
July 31st, 2006
poor ticket-desk-lady .. eheh
and wow is allison looking just a lil um... sickly .. er..hmmm
PJupiter
July 31st, 2006
that's the subway in case you can't tell *^^ I hope it looks alright?...