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The Sparrows' Song

by canniblecarrot
This comic is now officially dead...


What happens to a bird when it can no longer fly? And how long can it survive if it was only meant to fly?

In the attempt to fly Sonnet, the sparrow, jumped out of her nest way too early. The result was permanent damage on her right wing that left her unable to ever fly again.

Now, recently kicked out of her nest, Sonnet searches for a cure to her handicap, but her only lead is an old nursery rhyme her mother used to sing to her.


-updates randomly C:
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Pages
8
Updates
On Hiatus
Last Update
9 Years Ago
Fans
13
Readers
2
This comic is now officially dead...


What happens to a bird when it can no longer fly? And how long can it survive if it was only meant to fly?

In the attempt to fly Sonnet, the sparrow, jumped out of her nest way too early. The result was permanent damage on her right wing that left her unable to ever fly again.

Now, recently kicked out of her nest, Sonnet searches for a cure to her handicap, but her only lead is an old nursery rhyme her mother used to sing to her.


-updates randomly C:

Recent Comments

chibibarrage
April 8th, 2010
Bye~
...I'm sorry guys... "OTL

The truth is I've never really been into this comic...I was at one small point, but the the world of boy's love and gaiety came to view...and I never looked back...

I'm not going to continue this comic...I'm sorry, but I'm so bored with Sparrow's Song now... ;^;

Sparrow's Song was supposed to be my first comic ever, so it was a complete test run...I had the basis of the story, but I never knew how it would progress or what the dialog would be. "OTL The characters never had a distinct individual personality even in my mind either (no character developement) It got more boring as I thought about it, so I switched to a BL comic and had so much more fun thinking and creating a story. *failure*


But I would hate if the comic just completely died, so I'm willing to hand over all the characters and story basis to anyone who wants to continue it, if there actually is someone who likes this that is... (I don't blame you if you don't...I don't even like this comic anymore >w<;; ) Whoever wants this can message me and I'll hand over the domain to them~ They can interpret it anyway, and change the story almost completely if they like~ All I ask is for alittle credit on atleast the character designs~ <3 <3

But please tell me if you want to use the characters for your own story or something. I don't want random people claiming these charcters as their own design and saying "she said we could have them" or more than one person taking the character designs and starting to fight about it... =A=;


I hope you guys can understand! I love you all, thank you all so much~ <3
gizumimipichu
August 26th, 2009
Her wing came off!? Now I feel even more sad for Sonnet-san! I don't think you failed! Nice filler. :3
chibibarrage
August 26th, 2009
I'm sorry guys! ;o; I'm still trapped in the wonderful world of South Park and BL! >w<" But I did change the banner and layout alittle...FAIL...
Updates might not be for a while...But please bear with me! ;w;

Anyways here's alttle filler I drew a while ago to show I still love you guys <3
Heh, thanks, I'm not gonna stop anytime soon.
I'm just resting my arms...honest...
*Struggles toward Inkscape but fails to make it there*
Aww! Thanks guys! I'm so happy you two comment alot! >w< (it makes me feel loved *shot* )

Gizumimipichu you're always so nice! >w< But you don't have to lie! It's okay! I know my chibis need work ^w^ no worries!

Gremlin your art is lovely! I know when I was 13 I couldn't draw on the computer without making it look like scribbles! ...actually I still can't draw digitally... I use traditional art to draw everything 0w0; (I need to work on my digital skills...) ^w^; Keep working on your art! You have great potential!
Alright, laziness I can understand. My own comic sucks when it comes to art. I copy-paste everything. Alright, the wings are okay then.
Thank you! It's a pleasure to comment on this comic! Oh, they're chibis? They are chibi-ish! I love this picture! I can't wait for that guy to appear! I love that little goat/furry animal! ^_^
What? no! I love this comic! (kinda...)

I'm trying, so don't be mad ... ;^;

I know I haven't updated this comic in a while, but I'll get to it someday! I have most of the story and a few more pages thought up ...notwrittendownthough^^;... but recently I've have no motavation to draw Sparrow's Song! I've been sucked up into the loving world of south park and BL (and sparrow's song isn't a BL or a romance at all >< )

But I promise I'll get to Sparrow's Song again! ...after my addiction to drawing Southpark BL fades...

Look I even drew you guys a sneak peak at a new character coming up... Sonnet's brother; Zephyr!

(and I drew a fursona of myself at the top...)

Spare meh! ;o;


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Anyways I'm going to try to respond to comments more and try to stop being so lazy... so here goes...

gizumimipichu:
I drew chibis in for the filler and banner, sorry if that confused you, I guess my chibis aren't very chibi-ish (need to work on that more... ^^;) Thanks for always commenting! I'm always so happy when I see your posts! ^w^

The Gremlin:
Yeah, I know the wings are small...But that's because I'm just too lazy to draw details on large wings ^^; It's all about the laziness =w= Besides, I don't think I can draw very good large wings, especially if I try to add detail o-o; Thanks for the criticism though! Everytime I see criticism it makes me work a little harder 0w0 Yay!


To all who read Sparrows' Song:
Thanks! All of you make me so happy! I just responded to the comments on the last page posted, so sorry if I didn't respond to any previous comments! I'll keep trying my best on Sparrow's Song! ...but maybe after I stop fantasizing South Park BL >w<
The Gremlin
July 11th, 2009
Hmm...those wings look awfully vestigial.
gizumimipichu
July 10th, 2009
Awwww...Poor Sonnet-san! She can't fly like the rest of the them. She looks so much grown-up compared to the banner and filler. X3
chibibarrage
July 10th, 2009
Yay! Next page C:

I edited the prolog thingy to attempt to make it less confusing...(I just added music notes >.<; ) I hope that helps somewhat...

Anyways as you can tell I got lazy toning the first panel (they're not important charcters anyways :D ).

Thanks to all for reading! <3


EDIT: **also the sound effects on the first panel is laughter, the bottom left panel is leaves rustling >w<
The Gremlin
July 10th, 2009
I hate the leaf in the first panel. I want it to be crushed.
Hey, you said you wanted criticism! ;)
chibibarrage
June 19th, 2009
Nya...This is only the first page... 0w0;
(edit: sorry , actually the 2nd ish page ^w^)

But I'm sorry, I'll try to make it better! This is my first comic afterall ^w^

Thanks for the criticism! I love criticism... as long as it's not someone just being mean. ^u^
The Gremlin
June 17th, 2009
A bit of criticism:
So far, none of the one comics make sense. Neitehr did the chapter starter. i have no idea what's going on. Don't try to make stuff look pretty, make stuff clear.
Anyways, it's the first comic, so don't mind me. Great work!
gizumimipichu
June 16th, 2009
This page is so pretty! Keep up the good work! ^_^
Pokkon
June 16th, 2009
Ahh, I love this comic so far *u* Pretty art! *favs*
chibibarrage
June 15th, 2009
Yays! 11 fans! Thanks to all who faved and commented on this comic! It makes me so happy! C:

Anways about this page...
I tried to do some Japanese sound effects... FAIL. (my toning isn't the best either... ;A; ) I'm not japanese, so I looked them up online and tried to draw them in photoshop. (still fail...) The first panel's sound effects are leaves rustling in the wind. The second is wings flapping.

Words will come soon. (and peoples too! C: )
Anozen0
June 2nd, 2009
This is so awesome, and I love the song, wish I could hear it, you will have to make the tune someday ^-^
This sounded so sad. I feel sorry for Sparrow-chan. Hopefully, one day she'll be able to fly! ^_^
Lane-Chan
May 31st, 2009
YAY! This looks so cool~ Not bad at all.

Keep up the good work.