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pokemon (tom and riolu's adventures)

by sac522
a boy named Tom wants to be the best trainer in the world.then a boy named riley gives tom an egg.after a day the eggs hatches and out comes riolu a rare pokemon.
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pokemon (tom and riolu's adventures)

a boy named Tom wants to be the best trainer in the world.then a boy named riley gives tom an egg.after a day the eggs hatches and out comes riolu a rare pokemon.

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ausaf75
July 13th, 2010
your pointing out the obvius
Oh,so it is based of your pokemon game? Cool.
i did this because i was at celadon dity and that's where you fight Gardenia.
Sac,the first Gym leader is Roark...Ninny.
sac522
May 4th, 2010
that is actually its real data. i got form www.pokemon.com
awsome comic zil!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!save in jpg ok and this is AWSOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
My friend has come so far in spriting..Sac,im so proud of you!
Tasher
January 16th, 2010
I see the speech bubbles that you had are back. Please look at that tutorial i told you about. It does anyone a world of good. I was not trying to bash you in my last comment. I was merely trying to help you.
Tasher
January 4th, 2010
Ok, the plot has not been the best so far, there is little driving him to be a trainer, all we know is that he is a trainer and had not expressed much happiness from this. Try adding some backstory, and soon. Also the whole "want to be my rival" is not the best plot point. To become a rival a major even has to happen, not a casual battle. Make a major event involving the "rival" for the next few pages. There is also the fact that the speech bubbles are not the best. I learned how to make a bubble from this site. and learned many other things http://tabmok99.mortalkombatonline.com/spritecomic-tutorial.html The sizing of the sprites have been alittle off in the whole comic, i think it looked best in page 7 on the last panel. Other than that, the maps that you have made are fantastic. Ive tried to make maps before, its a daunting task, but you have made some great towns so far. It really is a comic that will help you become alot better at the art of spriting, because it is a good little project you have going. Just remember to save all pages in PNG format and you have yourself one nice looking page. Keep on making these!
RaveDuck (Guest)
January 2nd, 2010
I THINK THAT'S OFFENSIVE!
MAKE SURE YOU'RE ALWAYS GIVING CONSTRUCTIVE CRITISISM OR ELSE YOU'RE BEING A TROLL!!!
This is the most beautiful and profound thing I've seen in a long time.

The artistic direction was absolutely beautiful! The brilliance of this work must have been blocked initially by horrifyingly bad editing or something.

A+++++
I want to know how the battle goes!!!!
Woah, the effects in this episode are so awesome! Keep up the good work!!
Cosmo The Fox
December 31st, 2009
EPIC FAIL
archnova522
December 31st, 2009
comic rules dude best comic on sj
TCF
December 30th, 2009
omg this is so kool!!
wat did u use to make it?!?
u shud help me wid my comicz!!!