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Unbalanceold

by ravingcat
WARNING: future YAOI/BL, PROFANITY, VIOLENCE, GORE

In the future, the world has been reduced to one island because of floods. The huge population forces the people to dig underground to make room. Humans have created five "Levels" (cities) on the island -- Level 1 has the best resources, while Level 5 has the worst.

Level 1 and 2 are both on the Earth's surface, which has been polluted so much that the two Levels have been forced to create a barrier/dome-like thing to keep the "toxins" away.

But are the people just being protected from "poisonous gases," or is there something more to it?

...And ignore the fact that pages 5 and 6 aren't coloured...
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32
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Last Update
5 Years Ago
Fans
390
Readers
2
WARNING: future YAOI/BL, PROFANITY, VIOLENCE, GORE

In the future, the world has been reduced to one island because of floods. The huge population forces the people to dig underground to make room. Humans have created five "Levels" (cities) on the island -- Level 1 has the best resources, while Level 5 has the worst.

Level 1 and 2 are both on the Earth's surface, which has been polluted so much that the two Levels have been forced to create a barrier/dome-like thing to keep the "toxins" away.

But are the people just being protected from "poisonous gases," or is there something more to it?

...And ignore the fact that pages 5 and 6 aren't coloured...
<<<<<<<Read right to left.<<<<<<<

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ravingcat
September 16th, 2014
REMAKE
Hey guys! It's been a while!
Unbalance is back with better art and a refined storyline! You can find the remake here:

http://www.smackjeeves.com/comicprofile.php?id=147849

I won't be updating on this page anymore, but I'll leave it up in case anyone wants to compare the remake to this. :D
dgoluver199990
May 19th, 2013
this comic is dead? but its sssoooo beautiful!xO
lit-emo-rose
July 8th, 2011
Lol he got dragged away by a fashion lover
ravingcat
April 3rd, 2011
REPLIES

@Railse
Thank you so much! I'll try my best to improve so that I can restart this project again! :)

@Dagger_Stiletto
Yup, it'll be back for sure. :)

@AnTik
You boob!

That's actually a pretty good idea. >_<
pleasedon'tmassacremei'mtooyoungtodieOTL
AnTik
April 3rd, 2011
don't delete it fool. leave it here until you have the new one. your art has inspired so many people already :/

If you delete it I'll massacre you at school.
Dagger_Stiletto
April 2nd, 2011
Awww, how sad. Oh well. If it's coming back eventually, then I guess it's okay
ravingcat
April 2nd, 2011
I think it's time for a new beginning...
Let me start by thanking everyone who's faved this comic. You guys have motivated me and have given me so much to work towards.

I've been brooding over this for a while, and I think it's time for me to restart Unbalance. I've been looking over the past pages for a while now, and I've realized how bad the paneling, art, and everything else is. I'm really serious about this project, and I think that if I'm going to do this, I might as well do it properly.

I'll be completely starting from scratch. This will take some time though. I want to improve more and gain more experience before I reattempt this comic, so I'll be practicing with my other webcomic, Dolls. I'll be working on Unbalance again after I've finished Dolls.

Thank you for reading! :)

EDIT: Okay, so...it's been suggested that I keep the comic up. So, the comic's going to be up, but I WON'T BE UPDATING HERE ANYMORE. When I make the new version I'll just make a new comic profile with a similar name. Also, I've edited the post above so that people don't get confused. >v>;;
/EDIT
Beautiful!
ravingcat
March 7th, 2011
Replies
Hoho, I think I'm just gonna post replies here~

@ AnTik
Lol, hmmmmm pink....

@ Sychaar
XDD You noticed the eyes~~~ <3

@ megami23
Yeah, he's pretty mean. >_<
I think I'm gonna take you guys up on that idea~ Pink hair sounds nice~
Though not on Cai...I guess I'll do it on another character I've been meaning on introducing(not like we don't have enough chars already). :O
megami23
March 7th, 2011
That guy is a little scary ;_;
Ms. AnTik, I support your suggestion for pink hair!
Sychaar
March 6th, 2011
KYAAAAAAAAAAAAA
HIS EYES *spazzes and hides*
AnTik
March 6th, 2011
Dude you have too many good looking black haired people man.
Cut it out. D8<

Go make his hair pink. :9
ravingcat
March 6th, 2011
For once I'm on schedule~ 8D
Gonna try to update more now since it seems my addiction to games has subsided. XD

REPLIES:

AnTik:
LOL...GUESS WHO THIS IS THEN. Cai looks even more like Sei~ XD

See below for details V:
Yo dude, why you so ninja man?? <3
And no, no speedo. D< Yay for boxers tho. 8D

Princessyaoi:
Thank you so much!

Railse:
You, my friend, are the first one to notice that~~~ ;D
And thank you!

megami23:
Thank you~ XD
It was fun designing Sei and Cai~ 8D
megami23
March 6th, 2011
LOL height difference xDD
The coloring is really nice~ /shot for repeating self
Sei is adorable xD His character design is cool! 8D
i am already totaly in love with this completely.you have an absalutly beautful style of art!
Speedo.
AnTik
February 27th, 2011
HOLY CRAAAP.

I seriously thought the kid was KOU for a second. Scared the hell out of me. xD
My mind was going along the path of "ano's style is changed to shota" B:

And Caiiiiii~ 8D
I can't wait for the major plot change. Even if it takes you ten months. D8<



(and Sei is so cute.)
ravingcat
February 27th, 2011
Well this is really late...
I'm so sorry.

Also, pages are gonna get longer, because I want to fit more onto a page.

Oh yeah, get ready for MAJOR plot intro in about 10 pages.

REPLIES:
Rhi_Destiny_Fighter
Yeah. Accidents are bad...worse when it's outside the dome cuz there's no oxygen out there. OAO

AnTik
Ninja update~

Sychaar
Yus. Uh-oh. D:

megami23
Thank you so much for all your comments! >3<
Yeah, his room is pretty beat up. XD
The glasses question will be answered by the end of the chapter. ;D

starrynightcalamity
SEAT-BELTS EVERYONE~~ *is listening to the opening again*
I loved that show~~ ;D

TehBlue
People are too poor to afford to go to university. D;
Only the really rich people/the people with scholarships(which are really rare) attend.
TehBlue
February 23rd, 2011
owo.....4,583 students..? That's all? Isn't that, like....Waaay too few? <:3 I mean..My high school has over 3,000 students.
Sychaar
February 21st, 2011
uh oh?.....