Pokemon Beta

Pokemon Beta

by the being
The Trygon facility was made to create better Pokémon that can survive in their world, as species over the years have been dying out. Rymadanas, the head of the Red tower, desire Pokémon to become equals, with no weaknesses or be disadvantaged. Pokémon are recruited into the facilities by force if they lack the necessary amount of specimen.

The Trygon capture Pokemon and genetically experiment on them, and even themselves to achieve their goals. Those captured unwillingly are wiped of their memories, forcing them to obey without question. Some regions had seen the only way out is to urge their residents to undergo experimentation to keep families from being separated, and body counts low.

Opposition to the Trygon Organization has reached an all time pitfall. Only few pieces of land are still free of the shadow cast from the buildings. Is risky science the way to salvation? What is the root cause of Pokemon to be dying out? Unbeknownst to a Totodile, he would find the answers to everything...
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Pokemon Beta

The Trygon facility was made to create better Pokémon that can survive in their world, as species over the years have been dying out. Rymadanas, the head of the Red tower, desire Pokémon to become equals, with no weaknesses or be disadvantaged. Pokémon are recruited into the facilities by force if they lack the necessary amount of specimen.

The Trygon capture Pokemon and genetically experiment on them, and even themselves to achieve their goals. Those captured unwillingly are wiped of their memories, forcing them to obey without question. Some regions had seen the only way out is to urge their residents to undergo experimentation to keep families from being separated, and body counts low.

Opposition to the Trygon Organization has reached an all time pitfall. Only few pieces of land are still free of the shadow cast from the buildings. Is risky science the way to salvation? What is the root cause of Pokemon to be dying out? Unbeknownst to a Totodile, he would find the answers to everything...

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the being
July 8th, 2017
@TheMewgon40: HOLY CRAP I DID!!! 6 years in advance!!!
@Guest: Hey why not! Go ahead. Send a PM some time when or if you go through with it!
TheMewgon40
July 3rd, 2017
OH GOD THAT EXEGGUTOR IS TERRIFYING AND WILL (PROBABLY) ETERNALLY GIVE ME NIGHTMARES D:
TheMewgon40
July 3rd, 2017
'another multicolored muk'

THEY PREDICTED ALOLAN MUK HOLY FRICK :D
@the being: i really like this comic, to bad its ended, but can i use this concept to add to another comic?
I know someone must've already thought of this idea but...
Why not find someone who can finish the comic with the story that you've given? It could work.
This was a good comic. Not by any means perfect (then again, who is perfect?) but still great. I hope you can make another comic, but I can understand if you don't.
AzpbEagleHunter
October 4th, 2016
@the being: my favorite scene so far is the last 4 panels of this chapter cause Zelda
Omg (Guest)
April 26th, 2016
Oooooommmmmmmggggg da
Trah forsh (Tri-force)
Damn, I was hoping Asura wouldn't die.
Oh well.
Aww...
It's really sad to see this go, and overall, I think this was a great comic. The idea was fantastic. I hope someday I can be as good as you.
Ive been following this comic for a bit, and I must say, just go read it. Its gud.
No One's Face is a lot different from Pokemon Beta, but still very good, and it's got my curiosity piqued...

And I understand. Most of the time, I have what I think is a great idea for an original story, and all I know there are a bunch of various plot points that have to happen. But I can never figure out how to bridge the gaps, and sometimes the ways I do end up planning to connect them feel really stupid, cliched, or contrived.
Who knows. Maybe I could write out the chapters like a written fanfic? That would be cool, but probably might not happen. And if you didn't want anyone to do that, I'd respect your wishes and not do it.
Anyways, it was a great read. A lot different from the traditional Pokemon story. So many of them is just a trainerfic that differs very little from the games, but this was completely different from any of the games. See ya~ ^^
Already am reading it. c; It has a nice noir feel and I'm a sucker for noir.
People. Go read that comic. It's good. Although, I didn't realize it was your comic.
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@LKWayvern: Thanks for understanding, it means a lot.
I know it certainly feels random, and I'm sorry it is that way. I just couldn't muster things like dialogue or give more detail/context because there's so little to go on. A lot I've found with writing is that the outlines are the easiest part, it's connecting the dots in logical ways thats so hard.
No, thank you! :)

@Pantherbrine: Thank you! I'm glad to hear. I'm sorry we couldn't get to see what kind of character he actually was!

@Miyto: I'm glad you saw that! :) You really did get what I was wanting to eventually convey with him. Thank you for commenting a lot.
Yeah, I am very sorry I couldn't give you guys much for Asura's demise. :( who knows, had I continued to draw it out, she'dve probably lived, or some other meaningful conclusion. (Like you suggested!)

Many thanks! I'm glad you got something out of it. <:)

@SkunkWitch: You're welcome, and thank you for commenting!

@Shadowborne: Maybe...? *shrug* While the premise was unique to pokemon stories/comics nothing is original....it would have been handled in a much better more understandable way had I gotten to draw the rest. i am sorry though I couldn't flesh things out and make it more interesting.

@Guest: The wings are detachable! You can see this in chapter 6. :)
My latest comic project:
Called No One's Face, aptly. xD

As you can see it's in a totally different style, and quite a different genre. Has violence though, plenty of it.

Don't have to worry about me not finishing this one though! BECAUSE it's ALREADY DONE!

I just have scheduled updating for it, you can read the comic i've uploaded so far HERE:

http://nof.smackjeeves.com/comics/2243351/no-ones-face-cover/
http://nof.smackjeeves.com/comics/2243351/no-ones-face-cover/
http://nof.smackjeeves.com/comics/2243351/no-ones-face-cover/

Thanks everyone for reading Pokemon Beta. :)
Hope you like No One's Face- but it's understandable and totally okay if you don't care for the type of comic it is.
Wait...if Malveric is a Marowak/Lucario/maybe Floatzel, how come his suit has wings?
Ok ..... I think this is one ordinary conclusion for a tech based storyline
Thanks for the closure man! This story was unlike anything I have ever seen before and I am really happy to know how you at least wanted it to end.
Personally I like Cresselia being the bad guy :3