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Moonlight Apparition

Moonlight Apparition

by Darkhalo4321
When Jason and his friends, Toby and Robbie, decide to find an old well on Jason's property they are taken surprise by the strange building left behind as well as the crescent moon and cross etched on the boards sealing the long abandoned well. However, things take a nasty turn as Jason falls inside, and his friends are attacked by a creature known as a Shade! Will they escape alive? What happened to Jason? And who is the mysterious man that comes to the aid of Robbie and Toby?




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Moonlight Apparition

When Jason and his friends, Toby and Robbie, decide to find an old well on Jason's property they are taken surprise by the strange building left behind as well as the crescent moon and cross etched on the boards sealing the long abandoned well. However, things take a nasty turn as Jason falls inside, and his friends are attacked by a creature known as a Shade! Will they escape alive? What happened to Jason? And who is the mysterious man that comes to the aid of Robbie and Toby?




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I put 13-15 but im actually 12
I like the new one
TBH, the scarf on the old design i didn't quite like but the new one looks super cool
I like the original one better. It has that more mystical look to it.
I like the first one better.
Outfit
I too vote for the original. This one has more of an outdoorsy or industrial vibe to it, the original was more mystical. The navy blue and silver combo of the original is magnificent and really sells the whole "moon spirit" theme.
I think the original is better than the new one. The new one is more of a waif like look, while the first one is more mysticale.
Original is better
I really do think the original is better and more unique. Of course you are the artist, but I wouldn't change a thing. You could add a cloak (not part of the transformation, more like something he chooses to wear in addition) but I don't think it's necessary
Personally, I think I like the original outfit more. As someone else said, it seems more mystical (and the bare shoulders make him look a little more willowy which seems to ad to the otherworldly vibe). The new one feels... very hero/protagonist in a kind of jrpg way? which isn't a bad thing, just a very different vibe than the original outfit.
I would also miss the glorious floating scarf.
I don't know, they both look good. This one looks more rouge-like and the original more mystical in a way? Either way they both look good.
Was messing around with fantasy styled clothing ideas and came up with this redesign for Jason. The silhouette test looked good for it and I was curious if you guys would like to see me swap out the current design for this? I'm all for it if you guys like it better. Well, even if you don't I kind of have free reign anyways ahahahaha. But I do appreciate the feedback.
There's a lot more character in the way everything's paced so far! This looks great!!
Sorry I've been inactive about this! Here's another preview page from the chapter 1 revisions! I have been a bit creatively dry lately and it makes it hard to draw pages. Action scenes also tend to suck the life out of me because it's hard for me to coordinate them well. So, I'm a bit stuck. I started inking pages as a result. I didn't want to be doing nothing. I'm also doing inktober which is also taking up a bit of drawing time haha. I also caught a cold so I wasn't feeling too great for a couple days either. It's just been a blah month.
Preview of page 20. There's a bit more build up to our fight with the Shade monster, including a scene of Lark and Ker fighting before chapter 3. :)

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Riaya
September 20th, 2017
Woohoo can't wait
Enjoy another preview of the redo. I'm at 16 pages sketched out so far. It's going to be a LONG chapter I can tell. :) But I'm happy about it and that's what matters!

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@AnonymousMe: I appreciate that! :)
@Zorrieku: Thanks! I'll still post some sneak peak sketch pages and stuff :)
@Riaya: I won't I wanted to try getting it all done by January if possible, but we'll see. I always forget action scenes take me forever to draw out. So much planning.
@ImmortalDreams: Thank you! This really lifted my spirits :)
I really respect the care and attention you put into your storytelling and art. Take as long as you need. Good luck, and have fun!