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U.G.I

by asparagusunited
U.G.I = Universal Goddess Incorporated (Inc.)

Without giving too much away...

A girl is abducted by a small, hyper blond girl and ends up in a strange mansion full of strange people, then proceeds to discover just what is possible with enough time and resources.

It involves some of the following: Gods, Cake, Dimension Traveling, Evil, Magic, Vampires, Witches, Royalty, Cat Boys, Small Children, Curses, People Who Are Incredibly Old, An Ice Queen, Books, A Mansion, A Mechanical Rabbit, Time & Space Manipulation, Yaoi Fangirls, Succubi, "Angels", Dead People, A Moon God, Masks, Pirates, Faeries, And An Angsty God Of Death.

No, Seriously.

-Please Note: This will be incredibly long.
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U.G.I = Universal Goddess Incorporated (Inc.)

Without giving too much away...

A girl is abducted by a small, hyper blond girl and ends up in a strange mansion full of strange people, then proceeds to discover just what is possible with enough time and resources.

It involves some of the following: Gods, Cake, Dimension Traveling, Evil, Magic, Vampires, Witches, Royalty, Cat Boys, Small Children, Curses, People Who Are Incredibly Old, An Ice Queen, Books, A Mansion, A Mechanical Rabbit, Time & Space Manipulation, Yaoi Fangirls, Succubi, "Angels", Dead People, A Moon God, Masks, Pirates, Faeries, And An Angsty God Of Death.

No, Seriously.

-Please Note: This will be incredibly long.

Recent Comments

lisha103
December 8th, 2010
I FOUND THE UNIFORM!

is that.....is that rouge.....?
asparagusunited
December 7th, 2010
sorry it's taken so long, school's been busy and my scanner doesn't like me.

/generic excuse
am i allowed to critique? (´・ω・`)

when you show kokoro from the side like that...i think adding some (cough) stuff would help to make her less masculine.

or if the less visibleness of ...yeah....is due to the looseness of her shirt, then maybe add some wrinkles or something?
wait...is it just me or is the wall pattern recycled from hat shop? it seems similar...

OH SHI-shot-

...just felt the need for some effect (weak smile)
LeoDrake
November 19th, 2010
Artwise, the animation wasn't bad. Volume balancing needed work, though.
chapter thoughts
I need to learn how to draw action scenes. also, remember to upload, and stop forgetting characters for a couple of pages accidentaly.

Stay tuned for the next chapter!
lisha147
October 26th, 2010
this page was really good, lukes face is a little squised in the 4th panel, and also male koroko galore!!!!
lisha147
October 15th, 2010
there is not a single panel in which tori has eyes.....

you cant really see tori slip out of kokoros hands....

other than that, this one was pretty well done
lisha147
October 12th, 2010
evil storm and tori are evil....

cloud is kinda funny looking......

luke is suprizingly normal looking.....

noche is liek 'OOOOO NUUUUUUZZ' but really helping
also in that panel tori looks like a child molester....

clueless kokoro is clueless...
nice last panel!

ALSO STOP FUCKING CROSS-DRESSING!!!!
Poor Kokoro... I always draw her so manly...

anyways, CHARACTER FLOOD!
kokoro
she looks so manly... it's kinda sad...
lisha147
October 8th, 2010
2nd and 3 panel, m!kokoro is back
panel 3 i personally dont like kokoros eyes, and the first time i read this page, i didnt notice that tori had said cute as well...
7th panal.... its hard to specify....
m!kokoro is like wtf
and retarted!tori is like FUCKOFFSTORMYOUASSFACE

so.... i dunoo....
lisha147
October 2nd, 2010
oh lol, this page made me giggle
1rst panal, wtf arm
3rd panel, i cant read what tori is saying
4, 5, 4, 7, 8 panel awesome epicness
5th panel wierd squished noche face, loool
lisha147
October 2nd, 2010
goddammit, i meant the diffrence between tori and lucielle
lisha147
October 2nd, 2010
3rd panel, wierdo kokoro face.....
fourth panel, tori has freakles?
im having a little trouble telling the diffrence between kokoro and tori.....
lisha147
October 2nd, 2010
wow, ugi AND hatshop in the same day!?!?!? WHAT IS HAPPENING?!!?

anyways:
1) its spelled 'alright'
2) i cant tell who is speaking in the first and second panel
3) 3es panel - the dark souless pits of Lucielles eyes! ... doesnt quite work, does is?
4) 4th panel male kokoro FTW
5) 5th and 6th panel, her face is a litlle wierd, im thinking profile face pratice time....?

7th panel os good!
first panel, lady kami looks.. i duno, spindly, and kokoros face in the 2nd last panel is a little squished

sry, im not singned it, smackjeezed is stoopid
lisha147
September 29th, 2010
critique pg.8
panel 4 = awkord huuuug (daym... i wish i knew how to spell awkord....)

panel 5 where are her eyes?

panel 6 lucielle aged up too!?!?

panel 9 i cant even discripe how messed up her face/head looks

panel 10 kokoro looks like a boy in this one...???
lisha147
September 29th, 2010
critique pg.7
now im confused... HOW OLD IS SHE SUPPOST TO BE?!?!

panel 7=eye rolling!!

suprise!kokoro is... alittle TOO suporsed... i mean how does she even know what hawthorn manor is?

or did lucielle mention it earlier?
lisha147
September 29th, 2010
critique pg.6
ok, so she went from 14 to 25 then back to 8... wtf./...

AWKORD SCENE CHANGE!!!