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Over the Surface

by tallychyck
Ava is a young girl who is obsessed with machines and feels like an outsider in her town. As Ava's country mobilizes for war, opportunities and dangers arise that will lead her on a great adventure.
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Ava is a young girl who is obsessed with machines and feels like an outsider in her town. As Ava's country mobilizes for war, opportunities and dangers arise that will lead her on a great adventure.

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Only X amount of planes for X pilots, so permanent until circumstances dictate otherwise. He'll have to hope some other pilot is so incompetent that they trade him back in, or wait for the next shipment of Faucons to show up. Since this is wartime it probably won't be long...

Speaking of long, I notice this hasn't updated in over 5 years. :(

Well, if you ever decide to continue, I'll be around. I'm curious where you'd planned to take this story. I really like Ava. :)
laurbits
June 4th, 2011
Ava's an adorable dork. <3
scribe_drizz
April 16th, 2011
I'm thinking it's a temporary punishment. Like being grounded or being told to think about his behaviour.
mildtarantula
April 11th, 2011
awesome! i'm so glad they accepted her XD
Plume
April 9th, 2011
Damn right, she'll do it! :)
yehram
April 9th, 2011
O.O I thought the colonel took on Ava because the military had such a lack of skilled pilots? But now he's dropping Victor? With the amount of time and money that it takes to train a military pilot, it appears to be a poorly thought decision to train a new pilot and let a skilled one just waste away as a janitor, even if the colonel does want to punish him. I hope the colonel doesn't intend to let Victor stay janitorial staff for long.
Aleeze
April 9th, 2011
YEAH THATS RIGHT!!!
GIRL POWA!!!!!!!!!!
mappy41
April 8th, 2011
Excellent!8D
scribe_drizz
April 7th, 2011
YESYESYESYES!!!
Go Ava!
XtremeOverdrive
April 7th, 2011
she'll look awesome in uniform!
fireknifedancer
April 7th, 2011
Interesting
I have a question, if you don't mind. Is the government really willing to let a teenage girl who stole a plane (that's net worth alone is more then she's probably ever seen) let alone a GOVERNMENT plane (which not only is a felony, but becomes more then that especialy in this time. I think it's called a capital crime) get away with it? I mean had she damaged it, it would've cost not only the government but the taxpayers thousands to repair. There's no justice in the world.
XtremeOverdrive
April 6th, 2011
SHE MUST ACCEPT XD
neko-sama
April 6th, 2011
Say yes! :D
locoroco1
April 6th, 2011
DO EET!
yehram
April 6th, 2011
:3
yuukanami
April 5th, 2011
Suspense!
yehram
April 5th, 2011
Awwyeee :B
XtremeOverdrive
April 4th, 2011
oh... big trouble.
dragonlegends
April 4th, 2011
this is amazing!
GASP! MORE MORE MORE!!