THIS IS THE WAY WE BALL!

[ApaFox]

My eyes are feasting on this picture with delight.

[Ddraigeneth]

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Very nifty. They make me think of Jacob and Nini.

[Sonic-ock]

My eyes are feasting on this picture with delight.

Thanks man!

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Very nifty. They make me think of Jacob and Nini.

It's odd, Those are probably my favorite characters of Humon's. She seems to be sort of a polarizing figure on the internet, and even though I've never been a huge fan I've also never had anything against her. Thanks Amanda!

[marta]

This is very good, what's more fun done, hihi

[Sonic-ock]

What is more fun than done?

[repsychus]

Good LORD, all of your art work looks so...SLIPPERY.

As for this piece, I really enjoy the Tanuki girl's body type. you did a great job conveying plump, round curves without making her look ridiculous. Likewise, you did a fantastic job on the muscular oni. I think you could grate cheese on those abs. And, of course, the lithe, little kappa is really quite fetching.

Awesome stuff!

[Snuffan]

Good LORD, all of your art work looks so...SLIPPERY.

Some critique if mister Sonic-ock doesn't mind: be careful with the overly muscular arms and legs. Make sure that they still have a natural "flow". It's kind of hard to explain, just don't make all the muscles stiff and swelling and deliciously tightened. Make sure that some are kind of loose, soft, and they emphasise the motion or position of the limbs. Same with the plump girl, she looks more bloated and "stiff" than fat is.

Maybe try some gesture drawing practice if you'd like to improve it? Mostly with different body types. I think that, along with studying different body types, would really help. It would add both flow, and the studying body types would generally help with understanding how they move. Also, if you find subjects that are willing, try touching different body types. Try squeezing fat and feeling muscles tighten and relax. It's creepy but really helps with understanding how you should draw them.

I'll end my creepy perverted advice here.

[Seven Rain]

What is more fun than done?

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Holyshi-awesome. I love this.

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'Specially dat Kappa girl.

[Nymine]

Wicked awesome! The finished piece is absolutely fab. Maybe I'm just gushing but I love how you got the 'feel' of the hot springs with the background colors. Very atmospheric.

[ApaFox]

Wicked awesome! The finished piece is absolutely fab. Maybe I'm just gushing but I love how you got the 'feel' of the hot springs with the background colors. Very atmospheric.

Ikno'rite. I feel it's less about fan serves and about being relax.

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That kappa girl though, dat ass.

[Sonic-ock]

Thanks guys!

And especially thanks to Snuff! Pull no punches! I'll be doing a ton of gesture studies, I don't spend hardly enough time doing that type of thing anymore and naturally it starts to show in the work, need to flex my art muscles for real!

Anyway, Magical brawler ginger girl!

[JoKeRcologne]

THOSE COLOURS !!!

[Sonic-ock]

THOSE COLOURS !!!

So no crits then?

I'll make a revision with the colors dialed back. I want to see if I can make the clashing work, I've just been into very eye popping type colors recently and made a misstep.

[Mr Aids]

Dude I haven't popped by your art thread in a while, but man you've gotten so much better! I can clearly see an improvement in your art, keep it up!

[JoKeRcologne]

So no crits then?

It's a very manly gurl ...the eyes are a tad too narrow.

AND the colours are too much ...so many bright and complementary colours.
Your line art is very good but also coloured ...
In the end... there is a bright stain over the lines on her skirt. I turned the picture BW.


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Now I notice this picture in black and white looks pretty decent... nice work.