Gibson Twist wrote:I'm not entirely clear on where you need help. Are you just asking how someone writes a script, or are there specific areas that are problematic? The physical act of scripting is probably the easiest to do. Is it the action that is giving you trouble? Choreographing the panels/pages? I can probably help you if you can be more specific about what's tripping you up.
John wakes up. John gets out of bed. John walks into the bathroom. John gets into the shower.
John - I hate Mondays.
1. Novan - name of the 'world'
Odilon - faction1 (wants to preserve the 'old' ways)
Eltheros - faction2 (rebel nation)
2. Rumors of portal/rift to Eon appearing at Odilon terrirtoy
3. Anton, alarmed by the news formed a small secret group to investigate. Handpicks individuals whom he think are able to the task . This is a secret mission and Anton wants to make sure that their activities would not seem to tie up to him in the view of Odilon and his subordinates.
3.1 Vale - A former leader of a mercenary group that worked with Eltheros but failed his last mission. He was chosen to lead the portal recon group due to his prior experience. Vale was given the chance to avenge his fallen comrades and/or redeem his name in the eyes of Eltheros.
<plot continues obviously but I won't spoil what happens next lol>
Vale sitting on a chair in deep thought right outside Anton's 'office',
Vale's thoughts: It's my fault, and now I'm paying for it . . .
suddenly a soldier called him. " "His highness will see you now. Conduct yourself appropriately."
-Vale enters a room seeing Anton looking outside a big elaborate window overlooking most of Eltheros.
V: You called for me?
A: *still not looking at Vale* I have a new mission for you.
V: *flatly* Sorry, not interested. *turns around to leave*
A: *turns to face Vale* Don't you owe your men a favor after they died defending this nation?
V: What do you wish me to do?
A: Rumors of a strange portal in Odilon have surfaced. The details are in the briefing. *hands him a piece of paper* You are set to meet with a few others. Be discreet. If the rumors turn out to be untrue we don't want the unnecessary attention.
V: *looks puzzled* Why take the risk if there's a chance that this could be a hoax? Is there anything special about these portals?
A: Our ancestors originally came from these rifts. They stopped appearing many years ago and Odilon now concentrates its efforts on getting rid of us..'outlaws' off Novan.
V: I understand..but where did these portals lead to?
A: A world that was called Eon. It used to be Novan's prison realm where they exiled the evildoers of this world. Until things got out of hand. *smirks* So here we are. Do you not know anything about your own nation's history?
V: Well I-- *ignores the question* So, you're implying that we're criminals?
A: Absolutely not. There's no reason for us to pay for the sins of our ancestors.
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