I made a Poem, does anyone understand it?

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I made a Poem, does anyone understand it?

Postby ColeDX » June 20th, 2012, 2:11 am

I actually meant to put this Poem under General Discussion for reasons
I think I made a pretty good Poem :) Mind if you can read it?
Oh yeah, there's a message for you when you read it ;)
I just want to see if anyone picks up on the message
I'm kind of a Poet and I haven't written a poem in a while, just want to see what people think when I make them now :)

    They are not one but two all together
    See the twin of hearts combine into a soul
    Me and you are alike more than you think
    Troll oh please come from under that bridge
    In this world there holds the key
    They will search for that key with not their eyes but their souls
    Hate them if you will but you will never find love
    In that dark empty corner under the bridge

Spoiler! :
Read only the first word from each sentence :)
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Re: I made a Poem, does anyone understand it?

Postby eishiya » June 20th, 2012, 6:54 am

Whatever your reasons are, this still belongs in the Creative Showcase.
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Re: I made a Poem, does anyone understand it?

Postby ColeDX » June 20th, 2012, 4:34 pm

eishiya wrote:Whatever your reasons are, this still belongs in the Creative Showcase.

I thought that was for only Art?
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Re: I made a Poem, does anyone understand it?

Postby Vitotamito » June 20th, 2012, 4:36 pm

It's about life and death, pain and love, music and silence, heart and brain, black and white. It's the song that will end the world.
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Re: I made a Poem, does anyone understand it?

Postby eishiya » June 20th, 2012, 5:36 pm

ColeDX wrote:
eishiya wrote:Whatever your reasons are, this still belongs in the Creative Showcase.

I thought that was for only Art?

It's for any creative work, writing included.
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Re: I made a Poem, does anyone understand it?

Postby mitchellbravo » June 20th, 2012, 6:02 pm

Poetry IS art.

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