Twin Moon - vampires, elves and all in between

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Twin Moon - vampires, elves and all in between

Postby kabutoottonin » February 3rd, 2011, 3:36 am

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Ages ago, the great war rage for a thousand years. The vampires had had the winning side until, in a final act to save her species, the elven high priestess pleaded to the gods and placed a curse upon the vampire race, that they may never walk under the sun again.
As both sides counted their sacualties, they came to a mutual conclusion: Never again!

Enough time passed for even the immortal races to forget most of it. The vampire covenant, founded in the aftermath of the war, puts it's energy in keeping the peace. The covenant sends out its agents to deal with whatever may threaten the peace. But history, they say, has a way of repeating itself.

This is my first webcomic - so it start a little bad, but I will be improving *nods*.
I will update every Monday, and I'm trying to upper the pace to two pages a week.
All constructive critique appreciated, I want to know what people think about it, so please comment on pages or in the chat box. *bows*

Reads from left to right.
Comic contains BL.


I am but a beginner, and many faults I can see myself.
However, most probable, not all of them.

I would gladly receive constructive criticism, and tips on how to improve myself.
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Re: Twin Moon

Postby kabutoottonin » March 6th, 2011, 7:07 am

Bump
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::link:: A vampire was betrayed almost a decade ago. Now that he is back to
the scene, will he find her and avenge his pain? Will he finally find peace in
his broken hart? ::link::

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Re: Twin Moon

Postby Nigz » March 6th, 2011, 12:36 pm

wasn't a fan =( the anatomy in this comic super needs some work as well as the flow was kinda meh for me, and with the hand writing I felt it was hard to read at times

I think you should really work on the clarity of your pictures as well as find a writing style thats easier to read =)
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Re: Twin Moon

Postby kabutoottonin » March 7th, 2011, 9:08 am

Thanks for the tips. I wrote this in the comic as well, but wasn't sure you would read it...
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::link:: A vampire was betrayed almost a decade ago. Now that he is back to
the scene, will he find her and avenge his pain? Will he finally find peace in
his broken hart? ::link::

My current Avi is from the site KofK.de - check it out!
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Re: Twin Moon

Postby Nigz » March 7th, 2011, 1:25 pm

Yeah I went and re-read your comments ^_^

keep working hard and you'll get better sooner then later :D
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Re: Twin Moon

Postby kabutoottonin » May 16th, 2011, 3:28 pm

*bumps*

I finally got around to making new pages again, so I'll be updating regularly once more.
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::link:: A vampire was betrayed almost a decade ago. Now that he is back to
the scene, will he find her and avenge his pain? Will he finally find peace in
his broken hart? ::link::

My current Avi is from the site KofK.de - check it out!
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Re: Twin Moon

Postby kabutoottonin » June 16th, 2011, 4:39 pm

*bumps*
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::link:: A vampire was betrayed almost a decade ago. Now that he is back to
the scene, will he find her and avenge his pain? Will he finally find peace in
his broken hart? ::link::

My current Avi is from the site KofK.de - check it out!
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Re: Twin Moon

Postby kabutoottonin » August 11th, 2011, 2:51 pm

bumping
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::link:: A vampire was betrayed almost a decade ago. Now that he is back to
the scene, will he find her and avenge his pain? Will he finally find peace in
his broken hart? ::link::

My current Avi is from the site KofK.de - check it out!
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Re: Twin Moon

Postby kabutoottonin » September 11th, 2011, 10:53 am

*bumps*
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::link:: A vampire was betrayed almost a decade ago. Now that he is back to
the scene, will he find her and avenge his pain? Will he finally find peace in
his broken hart? ::link::

My current Avi is from the site KofK.de - check it out!
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Re: Twin Moon

Postby kabutoottonin » October 14th, 2011, 6:41 am

bump
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::link:: A vampire was betrayed almost a decade ago. Now that he is back to
the scene, will he find her and avenge his pain? Will he finally find peace in
his broken hart? ::link::

My current Avi is from the site KofK.de - check it out!
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Re: Twin Moon

Postby kabutoottonin » January 8th, 2012, 6:29 am

bump

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Re: Twin Moon

Postby Jam1 » January 9th, 2012, 7:32 pm

In the words of my animation teacher, "Reference, reference, reference." You definately use very little to none, and could probably profit greatly from life drawing. Draw people, places and objects from real life, or at the very least images you find on the internet. There is a kernel of talent in here but you need a LOT of practice, also a good tip for getting poses is to pose them out yourself, even take pictures of yourself in said poses if possible. Good Luck.
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Re: Twin Moon

Postby kabutoottonin » January 10th, 2012, 3:27 pm

Jam1 wrote:In the words of my animation teacher, "Reference, reference, reference." You definately use very little to none, and could probably profit greatly from life drawing. Draw people, places and objects from real life, or at the very least images you find on the internet. There is a kernel of talent in here but you need a LOT of practice, also a good tip for getting poses is to pose them out yourself, even take pictures of yourself in said poses if possible. Good Luck.


Thanks for the feedback! I suppose getting RL practice is a very good advice (specially since I don't have that much of a visual memory...)
I will practice more *nods* (I often draw in trains though... but drawing random people is kinda... well... and I'm to shy to ask :oops: - the Internet pictures is a good idea)
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::link:: A vampire was betrayed almost a decade ago. Now that he is back to
the scene, will he find her and avenge his pain? Will he finally find peace in
his broken hart? ::link::

My current Avi is from the site KofK.de - check it out!
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Re: Twin Moon

Postby kabutoottonin » February 8th, 2012, 7:40 am

*bumps*
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::link:: A vampire was betrayed almost a decade ago. Now that he is back to
the scene, will he find her and avenge his pain? Will he finally find peace in
his broken hart? ::link::

My current Avi is from the site KofK.de - check it out!
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Re: Twin Moon

Postby kabutoottonin » March 20th, 2012, 4:38 pm

*bump*
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::link:: A vampire was betrayed almost a decade ago. Now that he is back to
the scene, will he find her and avenge his pain? Will he finally find peace in
his broken hart? ::link::

My current Avi is from the site KofK.de - check it out!
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