I have started a yaoi comic called pokeman, loosely based on the popular pokemon franchise. However, all of my characters are original.
I have just completed the first chapter and would like some feedback. This can include the comics strengths, and also things to work on in the future.
This comic does have a mature content warning, so make sure you are the appropriate age.
If you are not a yaoi reader, please to do not give a hate review, keep it constructive!
I thank you for taking the time to look over my work. I hope you enjoy reading it as much as I have enjoyed creating it! POKEMAN