lewisnorthfield wrote:HOW TO GET JOB
If you're going to offer yourself as a writer you should at least use proper grammer, spelling and capitalization.
And the story itself seems very unappealing. You should try to find some way to better pitch it.
I agree with WooShooMoo.
Also I don't think you should think that highly of yourself when you're looking for someone to work with. Going with an attitude like that probably doesn't help at all, most likely makes it worse.
plus when you use the word "Job", the artist could think that you're paying for the drawings. That is something I think should always be included in the post, does it pay or not.
As writing is the only way to express yourself in recruit posts such as this (unless you're posting a video), you should concentrate on punctuation, proper grammar, etc.
Writing properly will make you seem mature, serious, maybe even nice, depending on what and how you are writing. I would be very careful of what I say in my writings,
as that is the sole most element from which the reader draws a conclusion. Also you're giving your first impression there, which is pretty darn important.
Just saying, don't take it on yourself. A friendly advice, nothing more.