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  • Real Name
    Gerald Asbucan
  • Age
    41
  • Gender
    Male
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It me, The Gripo Guy
Hey Gam!
I'll try to make a page by page review as you requested. Hope it helps.
Easy to follow
This page is easy to follow. It's good.
As for the nurse's dialogue in the last panel- "what we're I'm doing!" If she meant to imply her possession of the body then you may want to put a dash or 2 dashes after "we're," otherwise that could be an obvious mistake.
Break panel
Here there is a bit of a problem with the girl's head breaking out to panel 4. That's too much of the girl's head covering a more important event happening in panel 4.
Waiting Impatiently
Good work! How often do you update?
Majic
December 3rd, 2010
Level 4
Watch the level 4 power show
Majic
November 27th, 2010
Thanks
Thanks Vessalband! I have problems uploading the pages. Just give me another day
Majic
November 26th, 2010
That hurts!
So what does HH means?
Majic
November 26th, 2010
Attack!
They attack! Red is in deep trouble! The level gap is too much. Can he handle it? See you tomorrow
Majic
November 26th, 2010
Hehehe
Now they're out of blood! What is Wawili and his gang planning to do with Karamel? Will Red yield to this gang?
Majic
November 26th, 2010
...bating?!
Now that's exciting! Could there be some mature content waiting to happen? Watch out for nosebleed city tomorrow!
Majic
November 26th, 2010
Tribal
I myself belong to a tribal community from the mountains of Northern Philippines. I am an Igorot and some parts of my characters' outfits were based on our traditional attires. Thank you for showing interest
Majic
November 24th, 2010
Online
This is it! This book was pretty successful being an Indie comics. I'll be uploading Book 1, Chapter 1 in a few days. See you around!
Majic
November 24th, 2010
Level gap
Can Red cope up with the level gap? until next time
Majic
November 24th, 2010
Page 4
A new page per day!