Captain Libris
| Real Name: | Libbie |
| Age: | 23 |
| Gender: | Female |
About Me
Heyo!!
I'm Libris, purveyor of peculiar pretend.
I am 22, currently going to college, and I like yelling. My main hobbies are fiction and art and all they entail. I am inspired by the bizarre and have at any time way too many stories for even me to keep track of.
Currently, I'm writing:
Orange Soda - Victorian Gothic Horror in an Apocalyptic West
Knightlight - An attempted deconstruction of Magical Girls
I'm Libris, purveyor of peculiar pretend.
I am 22, currently going to college, and I like yelling. My main hobbies are fiction and art and all they entail. I am inspired by the bizarre and have at any time way too many stories for even me to keep track of.
Currently, I'm writing:
Orange Soda - Victorian Gothic Horror in an Apocalyptic West
Knightlight - An attempted deconstruction of Magical Girls
My Webcomics
Recent Comments
Comment on : 0 of Wish Wicked
Captain Libris, 13 May 2009 10:33 pm
YES.
<3
I'm so glad yer restarting this. :'D
-grabs some popcorn and sits back for the show~-
Captain Libris, 13 May 2009 10:33 pm
YES.<3
I'm so glad yer restarting this. :'D
-grabs some popcorn and sits back for the show~-
Comment on Filler - Doodle of King Me
Captain Libris, 02 Dec 2008 05:43 pm
I find it very charming and interesting. And I want to know who murdered Lia. :'O
My current otp is Jonas(Tynan??)xAimery, but I do so hope Aimery ends up with his dear Loyal at the end of all this, haha~
And I love the narcoleptic psychologist student. :'D
I'm pretty equally interested in the past as well as the present.
Captain Libris, 02 Dec 2008 05:43 pm
I find it very charming and interesting. And I want to know who murdered Lia. :'OMy current otp is Jonas(Tynan??)xAimery, but I do so hope Aimery ends up with his dear Loyal at the end of all this, haha~
And I love the narcoleptic psychologist student. :'D
I'm pretty equally interested in the past as well as the present.
Comment on Pg 213 of Night Shot
Captain Libris, 20 Jan 2007 02:27 pm
I ran into DAI first - so I didn't know 'Night Shot' even existed until it was mentioned
in a comment over there. Then I sort of put off reading Night Shot because the first time
I saw it, the premise actually didn't seem that... interesting.
I just read it in one go, and I officially change my stance. 'Night Shot' is a really fun read. I'm looking forward to how it turns out, and I really like all the characters so far.
There are a few things you can work on, though. First of all, your drawing style, while pretty cute, is kind of... ambiguous. It gets hard at points to tell who is who beyond ear and hair color. Most of them even look the same age - around ten-tweleve - despite the age differances. That and the lack of details make the art somewhat repetitive. Also, when you skip around, the lack of background features or a transition makes it a bit confusing at times - one has no idea they've moved to another location until the middle of the page or a page later. Finally, the characters themselves are at times a little flat. Not to a great extent, because you've managed to round the majority of them out in small ways over the course of the story, but many of them are only different on the page by one or two overwhelming personality traits. Giving each of the the characters internal conflicts and needs and goals could really help round them out to the reader. Yoru seems incrediably passive despite the internal tension he is attempted to be given.
Can't wait for the next page - keep up the good work! <3
Captain Libris, 20 Jan 2007 02:27 pm
I ran into DAI first - so I didn't know 'Night Shot' even existed until it was mentioned
in a comment over there. Then I sort of put off reading Night Shot because the first time
I saw it, the premise actually didn't seem that... interesting. I just read it in one go, and I officially change my stance. 'Night Shot' is a really fun read. I'm looking forward to how it turns out, and I really like all the characters so far.
There are a few things you can work on, though. First of all, your drawing style, while pretty cute, is kind of... ambiguous. It gets hard at points to tell who is who beyond ear and hair color. Most of them even look the same age - around ten-tweleve - despite the age differances. That and the lack of details make the art somewhat repetitive. Also, when you skip around, the lack of background features or a transition makes it a bit confusing at times - one has no idea they've moved to another location until the middle of the page or a page later. Finally, the characters themselves are at times a little flat. Not to a great extent, because you've managed to round the majority of them out in small ways over the course of the story, but many of them are only different on the page by one or two overwhelming personality traits. Giving each of the the characters internal conflicts and needs and goals could really help round them out to the reader. Yoru seems incrediably passive despite the internal tension he is attempted to be given.
Can't wait for the next page - keep up the good work! <3
Comment on Chapter 1-13 of Black Rain
Captain Libris, 06 Dec 2006 12:55 pm
Okay, firstly, I can be a little harsh when it comes to commenting, but I really do like
this comic so far. Your art is very good, I'm reminded of the heydey of Clamp's Magic
Knight Rayearth when I see it, and in a good way. It's detailed and pretty. The sory seems
interesting too - I really want to know more abotu the characters, and one gets the
feeling they are a pretty close family.
After reading the first chapter, however, here's somethings ye might want to work on: Timing, image quality, and clarity of action. You took several pages to say what could've been said in one page, and it made the very beginning drag a little. The image quality detracts from the enjoyment too - I'd suggest cleaning up your lines if the problem is from scanning, and if you are working in a paint program like photoshop, perhaps using the pentool to make smoother lines altogethe, or save at a higher definition. Finally, some of your action sequences (The 'explosion'? Or was the door closing?) are a little confusing. You might want to watch someone take the actual action, and then base your art on that - it might make things clearer.
Overall, though, I'm definitely going to continue reading, and I can't wait to see how this all plays out. ;D
Captain Libris, 06 Dec 2006 12:55 pm
Okay, firstly, I can be a little harsh when it comes to commenting, but I really do like
this comic so far. Your art is very good, I'm reminded of the heydey of Clamp's Magic
Knight Rayearth when I see it, and in a good way. It's detailed and pretty. The sory seems
interesting too - I really want to know more abotu the characters, and one gets the
feeling they are a pretty close family.After reading the first chapter, however, here's somethings ye might want to work on: Timing, image quality, and clarity of action. You took several pages to say what could've been said in one page, and it made the very beginning drag a little. The image quality detracts from the enjoyment too - I'd suggest cleaning up your lines if the problem is from scanning, and if you are working in a paint program like photoshop, perhaps using the pentool to make smoother lines altogethe, or save at a higher definition. Finally, some of your action sequences (The 'explosion'? Or was the door closing?) are a little confusing. You might want to watch someone take the actual action, and then base your art on that - it might make things clearer.
Overall, though, I'm definitely going to continue reading, and I can't wait to see how this all plays out. ;D
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Captain Libris, 24 Jun 2009 08:52 am