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I. Like. RAINBOWZ.
Also, singing, drawing, playing guitarrrrr and whatnot.
  • Real Name
    Bob
  • Age
    19
  • Gender
    Female
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You're great at drawing hands.
JUst thought I'd let you know..
- back to lurking -
@cannedsoup: I, too, think she has gotten better, and I really do appreciate that she keeps on posting, even though her "real life stuff has been piling up" (as she said herself).

I do want her to improve, that is one of the reasons why I pointed it out in the first place.
Why I do love this story an' all, but I do think that on some pages/panels your proportions are rather... odd.
Most of the time I think you're great at drawing the nose in the right size, etc, but at this page(and some other pages/panels) the nose (as an example) seem to be either to small or either to big.
In this case in panel five I belive Oasis nose looks kind of like a "napoleon nose", if you know what I mean.
A womans nose is supposed to be more like a curve (which I think you aced in the third panel) rather than a flat surface.

All due respect, I just wanted to point it out.
Love your comic, the story arc's great.
Keep up the good work.
AWWWWWW
Such a cute face... Ha, DAYAAA~<3
OMG
I JUST WENT STRAIGHT IN TO "AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW SO UBER CUTE" MODE. <3333

This page.. It's all... AWWWWWW~♥
AAWWWZ
You're such a nice couple. ~<3
D'AWWWWWWW
You're awesome at drawing poeple crying, just so you know. This page is awzum.
Improvement~
Cheers, now I dan understand what you've written, and who is Stan and who's not.
Awesome.
I totally agree with MultiPheebs.
I also think this one was rather... messy. Could not really understand how I was supoosed to read. From left to right? Right to left? Up to down and then right, around the corner and then back up?

Confused reader is confused.
UWAAAA
SOMETHING INSIDE OF ME JUST DIED. </3
WHAT THE-
Shuno... smiled!?
-snort- Short fingers, kkkkksshngh.

Sorry, but she really do have short fingers in the second panel.
Guess I'll check back later then.