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WHOA I was not expecting a turtle! With ribbons!!

I will admit, when I originally looked at this page on my tiny phone screen right before I went to bed last night, I thought the turtle had a bizarre two-toned mustache in the last panel instead of that being his mouth. That plus the ribbony things made me think "wow what a fancy turtle!"

I have now realized the error of my ways. >//>;
"I'm alive?!" *removes hand* "Nope, must be dead, no way I would've willingly put on a dress in any lifetime." XD
This turned out great! Dem hands! @w@

Also, I don't know that you really need a weird warning when the chapter cover page features a tiny maybe-Sentia in a huge mysterious person's hands. XD
YES, GOOD. This pleases me.

*Attempts to position Lan's arms around Sunny* H-how does this even work with the wings?
Man, I really love that dramatic lighting in the next to last panel, there. :D And I like how the characters are so much smaller than you normally draw them in that panel to emphasize the "empty" feel.

If Sunny doesn't give Lan a hug in the next page, there will be riots. >:O
Ah yes, the age-old practice of writing treatment notes in the dead of night in your pajamas, long after you should be asleep. Sunny is legit. XD
Well, that hand is gorgeous, so I would hardly call your hands weird. :3 Hmmm, so is that Sunny's hand?

Also, I never realized felangell leave trails of magic as they fly. I'm stupidly amused by this. XD;
Oh no! Tasteful cut to hide the fact that Lan just felt so awful he threw up right on the spot... Maybe on Nai. Just sayin'.

I'm really pumped to get to see Kei again! :D
This looks great!! I wasn't expecting this news to be the double page spread, but I think it works well for this. Especially since you have a convenient space there for the middle page gutter. I feel like a lot of double page spreads have SUPER IMPORTANT ACTION in the middle, which you practically have to tear your book apart to see properly. Shouldn't be a problem here, though!

Poor Lan hasn't even processed what he's hearing yet, huh. D;
Whoa, I love this! Beautiful coloring on those fingers and fingernails! <3

The title makes me worry for what's to come for these two! :< Although hilariously, I misread the title as "ashtray" at first. XD;;;
Toji: "....Lindina, did you somehow miss the part where she was MURDERING CHILDREN???"

I really love this page. I also realized Lindina is giving this passionate, dramatic speech to a tiny mouse, and it amused me more than I care to admit. >w>;;
Only Sentia's archenemy can break the anger-trance?! I really like Myaka in that first panel. I think maybe it's the neat shading for his mouth?

Lindina is telling Sentia not to push the boys, 'cause they're both gonna fall over like dominoes in the next page, huh. You don't have to tell me. I know I'm right. ;)
That blood on Lindina's lip isn't from the smack to the face--it's from that sick burn Sentia just laid down!! There is no way Myaka's gonna let Sentia get away with all this, is he?! Sorry, I'm getting a little too hyped for all the drama... XD;;

This is sooo irrelevant to the rest of this comment, but I have to point out that Resso looks completely adorable in that first panel. >w>;

When we were talking about ideas for punch sound effects, I had no idea LINDINA of all people would be the recipient! And jeez, Lindina, you literally have seen firsthand the powerful magic Sentia controls. Why in the world would you tempt fate by pissing her off like this??
Aw, man, Lindina! Stab that knife right in there, why don't you! I was NOT expecting that! Does it make me a bad person that I'm super pumped to see where this goes???
Ahaha, I'm always so amused by how these two just CANNOT get along. XD Myaka being all "how DARE you try to relate to me, GTFO" and then Sentia's blush intensifying in response... good stuff! >:3
This feeling... IT'S LOVE--okay sorry, I'm done. >w>;

I really like Sentia's sparkly eyes in that last panel, aaa! She can't take all this concentrated cute in the room.
Aaaaa unexpected cuteness! >w< As much as I love Myaka's reaction here, I have to say that the adorable Sentia faces in the first three panels are my favorite on this page, especially that annoyed/suspicious third panel there. Love it!
Toji's so adorable, as always. ;w; On a somewhat related note, I'm always so impressed how you can keep him about the same size from page to page. If it were me, one day he'd be his usual small and adorable size and then suddenly on one page he'd be MICROSCOPIC for NO REASON. XD;; It's a good thing you're drawing this and not me!
Aw, Resso's so sweet! ...In the first panel, anyway. XD;

I still really love that big Lindina panel. She needs a hug. :<