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    Mal
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Oh no! Tasteful cut to hide the fact that Lan just felt so awful he threw up right on the spot... Maybe on Nai. Just sayin'.

I'm really pumped to get to see Kei again! :D
This looks great!! I wasn't expecting this news to be the double page spread, but I think it works well for this. Especially since you have a convenient space there for the middle page gutter. I feel like a lot of double page spreads have SUPER IMPORTANT ACTION in the middle, which you practically have to tear your book apart to see properly. Shouldn't be a problem here, though!

Poor Lan hasn't even processed what he's hearing yet, huh. D;
Whoa, I love this! Beautiful coloring on those fingers and fingernails! <3

The title makes me worry for what's to come for these two! :< Although hilariously, I misread the title as "ashtray" at first. XD;;;
Toji: "....Lindina, did you somehow miss the part where she was MURDERING CHILDREN???"

I really love this page. I also realized Lindina is giving this passionate, dramatic speech to a tiny mouse, and it amused me more than I care to admit. >w>;;
Only Sentia's archenemy can break the anger-trance?! I really like Myaka in that first panel. I think maybe it's the neat shading for his mouth?

Lindina is telling Sentia not to push the boys, 'cause they're both gonna fall over like dominoes in the next page, huh. You don't have to tell me. I know I'm right. ;)
Whoa!!
That blood on Lindina's lip isn't from the smack to the face--it's from that sick burn Sentia just laid down!! There is no way Myaka's gonna let Sentia get away with all this, is he?! Sorry, I'm getting a little too hyped for all the drama... XD;;

This is sooo irrelevant to the rest of this comment, but I have to point out that Resso looks completely adorable in that first panel. >w>;
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When we were talking about ideas for punch sound effects, I had no idea LINDINA of all people would be the recipient! And jeez, Lindina, you literally have seen firsthand the powerful magic Sentia controls. Why in the world would you tempt fate by pissing her off like this??
Aw, man, Lindina! Stab that knife right in there, why don't you! I was NOT expecting that! Does it make me a bad person that I'm super pumped to see where this goes???
Ahaha, I'm always so amused by how these two just CANNOT get along. XD Myaka being all "how DARE you try to relate to me, GTFO" and then Sentia's blush intensifying in response... good stuff! >:3
This feeling... IT'S LOVE--okay sorry, I'm done. >w>;

I really like Sentia's sparkly eyes in that last panel, aaa! She can't take all this concentrated cute in the room.
Aaaaa unexpected cuteness! >w< As much as I love Myaka's reaction here, I have to say that the adorable Sentia faces in the first three panels are my favorite on this page, especially that annoyed/suspicious third panel there. Love it!
Toji's so adorable, as always. ;w; On a somewhat related note, I'm always so impressed how you can keep him about the same size from page to page. If it were me, one day he'd be his usual small and adorable size and then suddenly on one page he'd be MICROSCOPIC for NO REASON. XD;; It's a good thing you're drawing this and not me!
Aw, Resso's so sweet! ...In the first panel, anyway. XD;

I still really love that big Lindina panel. She needs a hug. :<
Aw, poor Lindina. ;_; I really like how her little speech here ties directly into what she was talking about when we first met her in chapter one! Wait, does that mean she has this kind of guilt about her parents, too? D;

Lindina, don't worry because you are clearly about to be picked up and flown through the air, just like last time the "paf" sound effect was used. I can dream, anyway. XD;
That poster is the best. So is that bunny on the bed! But I have to admit that it amuses me that none of the beds in Serrynia have headboards. XD

That last panel of Resso is so cute and heartbreakingly sweet. :C
Oh man, Resso is so stinking cute! >w<

Ahhh is it time for an outfit change? :D Or is Resso randomly in possession of yellow polo shirts and blue skirts?? XD
Augh the expressions on this page are so pretty! And I love the shading on that first panel! I'm super pumped for the next chapter!! >w<
Aww, Kei! I have nothing witty or funny to say to this page, just that I love Kei and I want him to be safe and happy. He looks so scared in that first panel! ;A;
She sees an obviously evil bush, right?? >:O

That first panel of Myaka blushing after getting caught comforting Lindina makes me unreasonably happy. >w>;
Omg Toji is so cute in that panel where Sentia's handing him over! <3 I especially love his little hair highlights! >w<

Resso is super cute in that last panel, too! But his ears and whiskers make me think he's just going to immediately stuff Toji in his mouth. YUM, MOUSE! XD;;