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Infernohog
I like sandwiches.
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    Infernohog
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    24
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AAAHH!! NOT A BOBOMB! I HAVE A SEVERE PHOBIA OF THEM THANKS TO THE SUPER SMASH BROS. SERIES!

EVERY TIME I'M ABOUT TO WIN A MATCH, A BOBOMB APPEARS OUT OF NOWHERE, 2 PIXELS A HEAD OF ME WHILE I'M RUNNING, I IMPACT IT AND I DIE!
ARGGRGGGHAHHHSHDHHHOAIH

In depth criticism time: in the 3rd panel Stephen goes cross-eyed. Something about the speech bubbles bugs me, but I'm not sure what.

I think this comic is good but it lacks a few things. And has too many bobombs and too little explosions. For being made (most probably) in Flash, I think it turned out well.
@Leo
Not to sound offensive, but take a wild guess, at what you think is the answer to that question.

@Pinklaggard
This originally wasn't intended for people to know that xD.

Edit: Oh, and for those who didn't notice, he stole a comic by me and is saying in the last panel "IF YOU USE THIS LAYOUT YOU MUST GIVE CREDIT TO ME"

"Me" of course referring to "NarutoDBZ".
@???

Umm.. ok... what the cake?
"Get sonic out of your comic"
Why? Its a SONIC sprite comic. That's right, a SONIC sprite comic. A SONIC sprite comic. You know, I really need to stop repeating "SONIC sprite comic". Because I think you got the point that it's a SONIC sprite comic.

OK, I'm done. Good luck with your SONIC sprite comic, Shade.
*IT BURNS!!!*

OK, your comic is very good, I love it, but you should seriously add decent backgrounds. *faves* And believe me, I don't fave a lot.
And he also sounds like the Shadow from my comic. Before it got reformatted.
Criticism time, note that criticism is to help you improve, not to annoy you:

1. Speech bubbles. Don't draw the shape before the text, draw the text before the shape, but make sure the text isn't on transparent background. Start off with a text box WAY too small for your writing to fit in, as you type in, it will automatically stretch. Now, draw a square that expands about 4 pixels away from the text, that goes around the whole thing in black. Now fill in the gap with white. Now get the polygon tool , but it on it's 2nd setting (can't remember what its called, but it draws an outline with a filled in shape) and draw the text bubble tail, then get rid of any unneeded black line, and you're done!

2. Comic layouts. Comics frames need to be smaller. To do this, get one of your comic frames and copy and paste it over the background, with the middle of the frame (not the outline) set as your transperency color. Now you should have just the right amount of your background for you comic. Deselect, then select all around your comic layout frame, now with the background, copy and paste into your comic, over the top of one of your frames, and voila! I also reccomend using stretch/skew to make your sprites increse by 200, makes it look more professional when up against a bigger background.
If you wanna try what the pros do, do different camera angles, like when someone gets mad, have a crazy anime background and the camera zoomed up right to the character's face.

Sprite quality: OK, what's with your sprite quality? I assume you save as JPEG. Don't. Save as PNG.
Orr, you stretch using the mouse tool. Don't. Use image/stretch and skew instead and resize by only multiples of 100.

If this is your first comic, you started out better than I did, I started out better than most average starting off comics, but wasn't very good. I too had too big layouts, but I mouse drew my backgrounds. Which is a big no no, unless you're amazing at drawing.
Hahaha, thanks. Yours is awesome too!

By the time I've posted this you will probaby have changed your avatar knowing my luck.
*comes back to comic every two seconds while waiting for an open space*
I weawwy wanna join sometime soon! @_@
That's... THAT'S ME IN THE COMIC?!?! AWESOME!!!! But why the red fox tail? O_O
Wow. Awesome. I LOVE Ratchet and Clank. Although it's got Jak and Daxter very close behind.
In other words, demented whining.
AAAHHHHHHHHHh

NEVER USE 1-TONE SHADING

AND ONLY USE STRETCH/SKEW TO RESIZE AND ONLY USE VALUES MULTIPLES OF 100

BLARGH
Don't worry. You should be harsh. Even the kindest of people would start cussing over here.
No offense, but: Fail.
Looks like Steve will enjoy playing Megaman Zero 4. Heh heh

Great comic. But a few of the things may be blasphemous.
My Grandad died a few years ago. I know the feeling. But later we were phoned by a priest to say that he was going to heaven ^_^

Which is a relief because he didn't seem like a christian.

I hope, like Mythril said, she has a safe journey to heaven. And it must be hard for your uncle too.
Did anyone else realise the "Wakka wakka" Pacman phrase?
Yes, but he's carrying a human with him, which I guess, a human's teleport properties are different to that of a robot. And them put together fuses the properties... or... something... I'm not phsyicist.
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Sorry mate, but the drawings kinda hard to make out.