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Raspberl
Illustrator and Character designer. Unfortunately I am not a wizard.

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Depends on the character, and characters talking to themselves is not necessarily a bad story telling cheat as long as its not overdone or too obvious.
However, you certainly don't need any dialogue on this page. Your artwork alone captures what he is thinking perfectly.
It only said hand! That's singular! Only one hand, dude. That's overkill. How rude.
I feel like there is quite a bit of foreshadowing on this page. Glad to see you are still in action.

In the last panel there is a typo, he repeats the beginning of his sentence.
I'm too happy that he's finally got some of his much needed rest to care that he's missed school. :'D
I am actually really curious about who she'll be paired up with.
Because I can I am going to assume the class is actually pronounced 'spells-word' and that they actually are living spell checks.
I think you accidentally uploaded the last two pages twice.
Watch out assistant, that kid has a lot of bandages. Kids with bandages are hardcore.I wouldn't mess with him.
Eh, hard to pretend to be a pirate with that sword. Get him a new one.
Congratulations for making it this far! I'm excited for the rest <3
Its a nice effect. It turned out well~
@Minakia: Especially if its just meant to have fun and relax~
dawwww, how sad. I'm digging this concept so far.
Raspberl
January 27th, 2014
I think you did a good job at capturing the mood. It looks cute so far <3
The change was subtle enough I didn't notice it until I read the author's comments.I personally like the clean look of the speech bubbles in the previous pages,but the outlines do make them more noticeable.
Welcome back!
Good luck with the new job~
Hahaha!
Whelp, that certainly wasn't was I was expecting, but its pretty spectacular nonetheless xD
Thanks~
@Mizumi: Yay! I'm so glad you like it! :3
@Author Jakes: Like it looks like a diamond inside of an ice cream scooper that they would use at 31 Flavors? There is nothing wrong with icecream~
Raspberl
December 11th, 2013
Seeing this update certainly made my day! Welcome back!