chapter 0 : page 26
Hope : Blinded Soul
March 14th, 2012
Hello, I just started reading your comic today (:
I truly love the concept and where this is going so far, I really hope you continue!
I think that your backgrounds are just fine as well, it would take away from your characters if they were too detailed or 'perfect'.
And, it is not at all hard to understand some of the panels, but it seems the problem has to do with the words "is, are, does" and how they are used. It's really not uncommon (: If you want I am sure some of us would gladly preview the page for you and let you know if some changes should be made.
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