Razmoudah
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| Gender: | Male |
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Comment on 053 of Anthro Kai
Razmoudah, 21 Oct 2012 10:49 pm
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AAAAHHHHH!! TYPOS!
Wow,I'm not sure I've seen a typo here before, and this page has several.
In the second panel that first sentence doesn't need the contraction.
In the third panel the last sentence either doesn't need the contraction or else it doesn't need the word 'have', and the word 'this' should be 'these' since you're using a plural.
In the fourth panel's second speech bubble the contraction is misspelled. Either the apostrophe needs replaced with a space or else the letter 'a' needs removed. Then in the third speech bubble in the panel you need to change the sentence to past tense, which would mean making 'text' 'texted'.
Razmoudah, 21 Oct 2012 10:49 pm
Wow,I'm not sure I've seen a typo here before, and this page has several.
In the second panel that first sentence doesn't need the contraction.
In the third panel the last sentence either doesn't need the contraction or else it doesn't need the word 'have', and the word 'this' should be 'these' since you're using a plural.
In the fourth panel's second speech bubble the contraction is misspelled. Either the apostrophe needs replaced with a space or else the letter 'a' needs removed. Then in the third speech bubble in the panel you need to change the sentence to past tense, which would mean making 'text' 'texted'.
Comment on CH8:04 of Boy with a secret
Razmoudah, 21 Oct 2012 10:24 pm
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Two Typos
The first is in the first speech bubble of the next to last panel. The line should be "Hey Hinori, I dyed my hair back to what it used to look like."
The second is in the Alt-text when you mouse-over the strip. It should read "Rei and his new hair color".
Nothing terribly major, but they are there.
Also, I was busy for the past two weeks so I've been doing a major catch-up run on comics. It's still a great story, and I can't wait to see how things turn out when the 'new' girl transfers into the school.
Razmoudah, 21 Oct 2012 10:24 pm
The first is in the first speech bubble of the next to last panel. The line should be "Hey Hinori, I dyed my hair back to what it used to look like."
The second is in the Alt-text when you mouse-over the strip. It should read "Rei and his new hair color".
Nothing terribly major, but they are there.
Also, I was busy for the past two weeks so I've been doing a major catch-up run on comics. It's still a great story, and I can't wait to see how things turn out when the 'new' girl transfers into the school.
Comment on Licensed Heroes Comic 9 of Licensed Heroes
Razmoudah, 07 Oct 2012 04:03 pm
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Yep, I saw this one coming. I predict he's going to spend some time cooling off in the local jail. If things go well he'll meet someone from a not-so-upstanding-but-cares-about-its-members-and-hiring guild. If not, he's going to fall in with a bad crowd for a while.
Razmoudah, 07 Oct 2012 04:03 pm
Comment on Licensed Heroes Comic 8 of Licensed Heroes
Razmoudah, 04 Oct 2012 08:22 pm
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@IRS Agent: It was probably the one person who'll report him for slacking off about it.
Razmoudah, 04 Oct 2012 08:22 pm
Comment on Licensed Heroes Comic 8 of Licensed Heroes
Razmoudah, 03 Oct 2012 08:26 am
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@Tiny Blue Dragon: I second AND third that one. I've only had a couple of jobs that I've left on short notice like that (and of the two only one was less than 3 days, but they were making it abundantly clear I was going to be fired any minute anyhow), but there was one jobs that paid great, had good hours, and didn't want experience and I didn't have a reference for because of doing something stupid like that, and the worse part is that the place that only got the 3 days notice would've given me a good reference, but I didn't learn that until over a month later, and all I would've needed was one good reference and they would've let me start immediately. It's taken me over 8 years to fix that mistake, as the older you get the less lenient employers get about such mistakes.
Razmoudah, 03 Oct 2012 08:26 am
Comment on Licensed Heroes Comic 7 of Licensed Heroes
Razmoudah, 03 Oct 2012 08:22 am
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@Gnigma: Your description of the MMOers is why a person should play their own character to build it up instead of paying someone else to build it up.
Razmoudah, 03 Oct 2012 08:22 am
Comment on Licensed Heroes Comic 7 of Licensed Heroes
Razmoudah, 30 Sep 2012 11:34 am
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Yep, it's the one time you don't even make a real effort that one of the two customers who will actually pay attention comes in. Let's just hope it's not the one who will report him......
Razmoudah, 30 Sep 2012 11:34 am
Comment on Licensed Heroes Comic 4 of Licensed Heroes
Razmoudah, 23 Sep 2012 02:26 pm
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@Gnigma: Ah, I can never keep them straight. When I spend maybe 15 hours a year playing MMO's, and yet 20+ hours most weeks gaming, it's hard to keep up with the jargon.
Razmoudah, 23 Sep 2012 02:26 pm
Comment on Licensed Heroes Comic 5 of Licensed Heroes
Razmoudah, 23 Sep 2012 02:07 pm
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@IRS Agent: That is a good question. From some of what he's said in other comics I'm not entirely sure how he passed Adventurer's School in the first place though.
@Tiny Blue Dragon: Actually, anything that implies you're from a family with good money (sufficient that you didn't need to take care of animals anyhow) automatically disqualifies you for jobs like that, they want someone who they trust actually knows how to put in a full days work (and adventurers aren't exactly known for that either).
Razmoudah, 23 Sep 2012 02:07 pm
@Tiny Blue Dragon: Actually, anything that implies you're from a family with good money (sufficient that you didn't need to take care of animals anyhow) automatically disqualifies you for jobs like that, they want someone who they trust actually knows how to put in a full days work (and adventurers aren't exactly known for that either).
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Razmoudah, 22 Oct 2012 07:42 am