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Sparksfrost
bloop~ :)
I draw, write, and read.
And I don't have a lot to say in these.
  • Real Name
    Sparks
  • Age
    23
  • Gender
    Female
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Okay I've got the next 8 pages in mind, so hopefully I'll be able to work on them pretty soon. Got the next three pages sketched out. This is a huge challenge for me oh my gosh. But fun. Very fun.
Yup
Okay yeah so this is one of the human characters. ;u; You'll find out more about her laaaateerrrr. She's the female sacrifice from the East Division of the planet Caesitas.
I think that you're a talented artist and that this had the potential to be a really great comic. The entire time I was reading this I was completely lost. If you slowed things down and paced it out and added some more explanations it would help. I was able to pick up what was going on from your comments sometimes, but it was never clear in the comic itself. You have a lot of talent, but you should work on developing your story a bit more. Your readers can't know what's going on in your head, no matter how well you know the story. Wow that was long. XD But I hope it was helpful. :)