Hi. I don't like much of anything...except pocky. And pianos. I hate fish-just the live ones, though-I enjoy eating fish. Hobbies...? *Coughs and looks away* Dreams for the future...? Well, I want to do stuff...
July 19th, 2012
You do realize...'sense' refers to intellect or the comprehension of something. I believe the correct word you should use in lieu of that would be 'since'. I apologize for posting this, as I greatly enjoy this story, but the grammar can get a bit...annoying after the nth time reading it.
Chapter 5 Page 36
July 18th, 2012
I love the contrast between the Pokemon names and the Elle's personality. Namely, tough and intimidating...and then wimpy and hypocritical.
Rare Candy Treatment
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